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Re: Theatre
Hey there, OniiChan, it's ya girl, Leafpool, here with a review. After reading this, I am very confused. FIRST STANZA: Are you crying over the seniors, and I'm assuming said ...
May 1, 2018 -
Re: Am I Beautiful?
Hey there, SpaceSnickerdoodle; it's your girl CocoaCat coming in with a review. Wow, this poem's feelings are really raw and strong and beautiful. Each stanza has meaning and there aren't ...
Feb 13, 2018 -
Re: I'm skinny now
Hey there, Snoops; it's your girl CocoaCat coming in with a review! Wow, this was really powerful. I adore it; though I had a problem with these couple of stanzas. ...
Feb 13, 2018 -
Re: I Should've Known
Hey there, resfeber, CocoaCat is here with a review for your poem. Wee little reminder, when you publish a story or a poem, it says who wrote it and when ...
Feb 7, 2018 -
Re: lost pencil
Hey there, lexihearn01, CocoaCat dropping in with a wee little comment. I was going to start by talking about the lack of capitals, but that's out of question so let's ...
Feb 6, 2018 -
Re: blossom
Hey there, lydiathechica, CocoaCat here! You know, I was just thinking, if all plants had feelings, vegans would eat air. Anyway... This is so sad, the poor little flower. I ...
Feb 6, 2018 -
Re: Never Again
Hey there, ZeldaIsShrek, it's ya girl CocoaCat coming in with a review. First off, I really liked your poem, it flowed nicely and was captivating. My only issue with this ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: The forgetting mystery
Hey there, sreekanthhockey (interesting name there), it's your girl Leafpool coming in with a review. Ok, first of all, this is just a little confusing. "I DON’T REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED ...
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: Past Midnight Dancer
Hey there, Radrook, CocoaCat here with a quick review! I'm going to kick it off with grammar and punctuation. I'm not really sure what you meant by this word, "A.M.mambo", ...
Jan 24, 2018 -
Re: Fear
Hey there, Ashley602338, CocoaCat here with a short review! I'm going to start off with grammar and placing issues (which there are very few of). At the beginning of each ...
Jan 24, 2018 -
Re: A complete man with a broken heart
Hey there, crazystar; CocoaCat here with a review! Also, welcome to The Young Writer's Society! I'm gonna get a little violent here, it really annoys me when people make very ...
Jan 22, 2018 -
Re: Of What Should I Have Wrote
Hey, Supe4Natural; CocoaCat here with a review! Also, welcome to The Young Writer's Society! :) I'm gonna start off with grammar and punctuation. I don't see any wrong spellings, so ...
Jan 22, 2018 -
Re: The View Of A Cat
Hey there Lake and thanks for tagging me, I needed a little poem about cats right now. :) Okay, this is literally perfect. For as long as I can remember, ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: The Ref Knew
Hey there, Radrook, I just finished reviewing another one of your poems and THIS REF IS HORRIBLE!!! Wow, just wow. It was great but really, bruh, really? RACIST!!! Moving on, ...
Dec 14, 2017 -
Re: Words are like drugs
Hey there, Radrook, it's your girl Leafpool coming in with a review! I absolutely ADORE the rhyming in this poem. And no grammar or punctuation mistakes, nice! I don't know ...
Dec 14, 2017
