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  • Poetry » Theatre, Dramatic Re: Theatre

    Hey there, OniiChan, it's ya girl, Leafpool, here with a review. After reading this, I am very confused. FIRST STANZA: Are you crying over the seniors, and I'm assuming said ...

    May 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Am I Beautiful?

    Hey there, SpaceSnickerdoodle; it's your girl CocoaCat coming in with a review. Wow, this poem's feelings are really raw and strong and beautiful. Each stanza has meaning and there aren't ...

    Feb 13, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm skinny now

    Hey there, Snoops; it's your girl CocoaCat coming in with a review! Wow, this was really powerful. I adore it; though I had a problem with these couple of stanzas. ...

    Feb 13, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I Should've Known

    Hey there, resfeber, CocoaCat is here with a review for your poem. Wee little reminder, when you publish a story or a poem, it says who wrote it and when ...

    Feb 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: lost pencil

    Hey there, lexihearn01, CocoaCat dropping in with a wee little comment. I was going to start by talking about the lack of capitals, but that's out of question so let's ...

    Feb 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: blossom

    Hey there, lydiathechica, CocoaCat here! You know, I was just thinking, if all plants had feelings, vegans would eat air. Anyway... This is so sad, the poor little flower. I ...

    Feb 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Never Again

    Hey there, ZeldaIsShrek, it's ya girl CocoaCat coming in with a review. First off, I really liked your poem, it flowed nicely and was captivating. My only issue with this ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The forgetting mystery

    Hey there, sreekanthhockey (interesting name there), it's your girl Leafpool coming in with a review. Ok, first of all, this is just a little confusing. "I DON’T REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED ...

    Jan 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Past Midnight Dancer

    Hey there, Radrook, CocoaCat here with a quick review! I'm going to kick it off with grammar and punctuation. I'm not really sure what you meant by this word, "A.M.mambo", ...

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Other » Horror, Realistic Re: Fear

    Hey there, Ashley602338, CocoaCat here with a short review! I'm going to start off with grammar and placing issues (which there are very few of). At the beginning of each ...

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: A complete man with a broken heart

    Hey there, crazystar; CocoaCat here with a review! Also, welcome to The Young Writer's Society! I'm gonna get a little violent here, it really annoys me when people make very ...

    Jan 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Of What Should I Have Wrote

    Hey, Supe4Natural; CocoaCat here with a review! Also, welcome to The Young Writer's Society! :) I'm gonna start off with grammar and punctuation. I don't see any wrong spellings, so ...

    Jan 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: The View Of A Cat

    Hey there Lake and thanks for tagging me, I needed a little poem about cats right now. :) Okay, this is literally perfect. For as long as I can remember, ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Ref Knew

    Hey there, Radrook, I just finished reviewing another one of your poems and THIS REF IS HORRIBLE!!! Wow, just wow. It was great but really, bruh, really? RACIST!!! Moving on, ...

    Dec 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Words are like drugs

    Hey there, Radrook, it's your girl Leafpool coming in with a review! I absolutely ADORE the rhyming in this poem. And no grammar or punctuation mistakes, nice! I don't know ...

    Dec 14, 2017


Light griefs are loquacious, but the great are dumb.
— Seneca