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I love this. I love how you portrayed it. I love how you WROTE it. The way you refer to the plant as something so important, with it arms, and ...

I like this! Though, there shouldn't be a period after 'feeling'. When I read it, I of course knew what you meant, but the comma indicates a pause, basically, and ...

This was put together PERFECTLY. I cannot tell you how many poems I've read, and written myself, that just did not work out as well as this one did. It's ...

This. This is great. I love how you wrote this, I love the invisible depth, I absolutely just admire you for this. I've ever thought of what was beyond, but ...

Okay, can I just say- FREAKING AWESOME JOB I really, really, REALLY liked the way you worded this poem, it's just so perfect. I have no criticism, only compliments, so ...

Okay, so I've said this to a few people before that's done the same thing as you, so I'll say it again- GREAT job writing a short poem. I know ...

So, as much as you have going on here, I still managed to pick out some parts that didn't exactly sound right, and also a lot of things that I ...

Hi, Pen! Okay, can I just say~ AMAZING POEM, YOU'RE AWESOME, AND I FRIGGIN' LOVE YOUR AVVIE~ You concept is very clear, but, as much as I love how much ...

Hi, NBA! (Short for your username ^.^) I really enjoyed your poem. It was very...wordy. And inspiring. I feel like you really captured the idea of your concept. It just ...

Hi, fellow 15-year-old! So, I get everything that you're saying in this. Also, I really like the way you made this so short. Short poems add more...sparkle? I can't think ...

I really like this, Zhia! I've been trying, WAITING, for somebody to do a poem pertaining to one of Edgar Allan Poe's works! (He's my most favorite writer, mostly because ...

This is...very unsettlingly inspiring. I love it when people take a small topic, write a SMALL poem, but still seem to make it great! XD With your wording, it doesn't ...

I really, really enjoyed reading this. But, I feel as if you could have, um..worded it a little bettr in a few places. It's nothing big, but there was these ...

THIS I love this. It was/is ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS. Though, I think you should edit a few of the commas out. They're not, like, very VERY bad, but some of them ...

This is an awesome, just great poem, but as is progressed, and as I read, I found myself just lazily looking through the rest. I guess you could say that ...