ChocolateCello

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! You had a really interesting story line and some great dialogue. I suck at praising though so on to the edits. [i.]An extra ...

'Ello, it's Cello! This was a very interesting start to a story. Over all, a good plot and beautiful description. You had a few mistakes but they tended to be ...

'Ello, it's Cello! Here for a short review over a short piece! This was a wonderful poem but I especially enjoyed the first stanza. I'm a mess when it comes ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! Very interesting poem. You took what seemed to be a very simple concept, 'A friend names Bob', and turned it into a rather ...

Hey! Cello here! 'Ello, it's Cello! This was a really great poem. It had a lot of imagery and really took the reader to the scene of the story. When ...

'Ello, it's cello! (And a very late welcome to the site!) You had outstanding vocabulary in this piece and I truly admire your work on this poem. You told a ...

'Ello, it's Cello! OKAY WOW! This is the first poem I've read in awhile with punctuation . Do you know how nice it is to have to periods and commas ...

'Ello, it's Cello! I always love this point of view when it comes to books and I always think about this when I'm writings. It's such a beautiful power, and ...

'Ello, it's cello! Great poem. It had a lot of meaning and you did a wonderful job showing the message. I've been complaining about this to everyone- Commas and periods! ...

'Ello, it's cello! I'm here to leave a short review for a short poem! I tend to enjoy most of the works on this site (As you might notice if ...

'Ello, it's cello! This review will be rather short as you're poem is only 62 words long. (I may of miscounted slightly but whatever) You had some great imagery here ...

'Ello, it's cello! This was a great poem but your lack of punctuation makes me cringe. Little errors can make or break a poem so it's important to avoid them. ...

Hey! Cello here! Or should I say... 'Ello, it's cello! *Mumbling to self* Yes, I'll have to use that one again... Okay, on to reviewing. This was a beautiful poem ...

Hello! Cello here! Really interesting work. I know the feeling when a little crush turns into a lot more. You did a beautiful job putting it into words. Punctuation and ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! (A late welcome to the site) First off, I honestly don't think you need to clarify that you're not trying to insult the ...