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  • Poetry » Realistic, Film Re: I can't see through this blindfold god help me

    'Ello, it's Cello! Let me start by saying welcome. I hope you enjoy the site! Now onto the reviewing... You clearly had some emotion in this poem, which was great. ...

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Confusion

    'Ello! It's Cello! With all honesty, I enjoyed this poem, but it felt rather cliche. Open doors, choosing roads to take, 'what difference would it make'. All (in my opinion) ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Magical Reading

    Hey! Cello here! Happy review day! I really like the concept of this poem but it felt a little... plain. I've seen tons of things like this, and with full ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: The Deepest Poem Ever

    'Ello, it's cello! Okay, so highfive for being a doctor who fan. This one will be a challenge to review, as it's only twelve words. How about... Punctuation? My rule ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: On a Trout And Salmon Farm

    Hey! It's Cello! You do a great job incorporating imagery into your work but I have to say, you're flow feels a bit uncomfortable. The first place I noticed this ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Somedays

    'Ello, it's Cello! Happy review day! I enjoyed this poem. It was straight to the point and did a wonderful job conveying emotion. I feel like the set up at ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A windows' reflection

    Hey! Cello here! I really enjoyed this. I can't put it into words but... *likes* What's the point of a review without critique though? Let's start- Because you don't have ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: 5

    Hey! Cello here! Great poem. You clearly have some talent. (I read your other work too and enjoyed it) The only things that really bothered me was the punctuation. I ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 10

    Hey! Cello here! Lovely poem! You had some great emotion and you put it beautifully into words. Still, there are a few mistakes that need edited. All you had to ...

    Dec 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: (I'm putting 2 abecidarians in one because I need to sleep; you only need to edit one, please :))

    'Ello, it's Cello! It said you didn't have to review both but I thought I would anyway. Honestly, I'm going to have to disagree with ellimist here (On the first ...

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: I Can See The Unicorn

    Hey! Cello here! Welcome to the site! This was an interesting little poem and I hope to see more from you in the future. You had a creative little concept ...

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Be Gentle

    Hey! Cello here! Beautiful writing. You had a great message and it was written amazingly. You rhyme scheme threw me off a bit though. The first and last stanzas are ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Up close

    Hey! Cello here! I thought this was really cute. It was a very simple idea, and it was written very well. The simplicity of it all was just so beautiful, ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Everything Turned Out Good In a Logical Way!

    Hey! Cello here! I couldn't help but smile at this poem, though I'd like to point out the flow/beat is a little off. The rule for rhyming that that the ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Comfort Food

    Hey! Cello here! Okay... You said I should review this but aahhh this is a strugle WAIT I DIDN"T SAY 'ELLO IT'S CELLO I COULD GO BACK AND DELETE IT ...

    Nov 29, 2015


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