ChipsMcCoy

Hello, Chips here with a review. You have a very interesting concept here. I like how you've organized your poem so that each stage holds a certain time and emotion ...

Hello, Chips here to review. I liked how simple this was to understand, it had a nice and positive message at the end which was refreshing to see so well ...

Hey, Weymouth, Chips here with a review. This was quite a sentimental piece, it had emotion and a clear focus. It was also cohesive and told a story between two ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! Chips here with a review. This was a really cute poem, the humor was good. For a short poem, it worked well. I also liked the ...

Hello, Chips here with a review. I thought you had a really interesting idea here, it was quite dreamy and I liked your use of rhetorical question. I do have ...

Hello, Rurouni, Chips here to review. This was an interesting poem, it really conveyed the concept of wandering. Wandering is all i ever do. i wonder Through hardships and smiles. ...

Hello happyface, Chips here with a review! And a belated welcome to YWS too, hope you've been enjoying it so far. I see you've taken an interest with politics, war ...

Hey, Chips here with a review. This is a lovely poem you have here. It was nice to see the positive connotations and the encouraging message you brought. "Strong and ...

Hello, Chips here with a review! It's good to see that cigarettes are not in your life anymore so congratulations on that. You've expressed it well in your poem too. ...

Hey Chips here to review! I found this to be a very interesting concept for a poem, it had some great descriptions and metaphors. I also liked how you incorporated ...

Hey Chips here to review. I think the capitalization you've used created an good effect for what you were going for in this poem. You did well in effectively setting ...

Hello, Chips here with a review! Well, I thought this poem was certainly unique and different, which was interesting. It seemed to show a journey of different people relating to ...

Hey, Chips here with a review! I enjoyed reading your poem. You've highlighted the struggles most people, especially young people tend to have. It was written well and simple to ...

Hello, Chips here to review! You have a really lovely poem here, I like the descriptions you've used and the formatting layout worked well with your poem. I also liked ...

Hey, Chips here with a review! Well, what an emotive poem you have here. I found this piece to be philosophical and very thought provoking indeed, considering its length. In ...