Hey, yo, Lyssiekins! Strange here, again, on this fantastic Review Day and I have a review for you!
This was a very blissful poem. It's sweet, and blunt. It captures tragedy in the subject that it's being dealt with, Dementia, or maybe I'm wrong, but I'll get to that later. I like that this is short, and those two adjectives that I said before. It's really in classic taste of one of those poems that you'll read in Middle School English. The whole message that I got out of this is that "It was never really there." Your mind was never really there. Now, I hope you know, this can be a really good love poem, describing the love between two that ended tragically. The love was never quite there, nor was the narrators mind. I really like that part. There is nothing wrong with how you described, or showed the effects of this poem. It's nice, and right on. A lot about this poem is well done. Going along the lines of being short, meaningful, nice, and sweet. You hit it in all the sweet spots. That's what a poem should do, and you did it. Sorry if this seems quite repetitive, but my mind is full right now on Review Day. I really liked this poem, and will start following you after I write this review. Once again, good job.
Strange gives you...
8.7/10
Great job,
Keep writing,
Stay groovy, my friend.
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