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Re: The Dark
Hey, Chips here with a review! I found it interesting how you personified darkness and stated how it can be both good and bad, your poem was consistent with the ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: "You're not that beautiful."
Chips here with a review! "You're not that beautiful," you said to me, and I play the words over in my head until they seem to go on forever and ...
Jul 5, 2016 -
Re: The Death That Happens While You're Eating
The title of this poem really drew me in as eating can be associated with survival, nourishment or even life itself, so death happening in an act that is seemingly ...
Jul 5, 2016 -
Re: My thoughts are blue
Hey Chips McCoy here back at it again with the reviews! I really liked how the poem became progressively more emotional and personal, it helps the reader become more invested ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: iv - filters
Hello, Chips here with a review. Firstly, the comments you've made to update us such as, "I have been in the poetry mood lately so here's my newest idea." And ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: Afraid
Hey, Chips here with a review. "I've never been good at relationships. I'll be the first to admit, It's simply because I am afraid." I liked the opening sentence, it ...
Aug 10, 2015 -
Re: For All Eternity
Hello, Chips here with a review. I thought the title of your poem was intriguing as perspectives on eternity can be varied and unique to each individual. I thought the ...
Aug 10, 2015 -
Re: Dear Future Husband | Edited
Hey, Chips here with a review. "Dear future husband, Nope, you’re not perfect. But if you can make *chai, *biryani, Or *samosas, You can’t get any sweeter." This opening was ...
Aug 10, 2015 -
Re: Childhood Poetry
Hey, Chips here with a review. Although you stated below, you hate both the poems, I really enjoyed reading them. They were very joyful and light-hearted. I have some suggestions ...
Aug 9, 2015 -
Re: Fighting Fear
Hi, Chips here with a review! The title of your poem was intriguing as fear is something everyone has gone through at one point or another in their lifetime. I ...
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: A letter to Santa
Hello, I'll be reviewing your poem. Welcome to YWS too! This poem was certainly an early start to the festive Christmas season ahead, so good job on that. Although Santa ...
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: That Girl
Hey, I'll be reviewing your poem, and welcome to YWS! This is a good first poem to post. The stanza arrangement was neatly organised and simple to follow. I liked ...
Aug 6, 2015 -
Re: Angels
Hello, Chips here with a review. This review will probably be very short as your poem is more on the short side. I found this poem to be very alluring. ...
Aug 6, 2015 -
Re: stay where you belong
Hey, welcome to YWS! And I'll be reviewing your poem today. This poem was very sweet and positive, though it did bittersweet moments. I liked how the character continues on ...
Aug 6, 2015 -
Re: Commitment
Hello and welcome to YWS. I'll be reviewing your poem. This was an interesting piece of work. Fear is indeed what many struggle with at one point or another in ...
Aug 6, 2015
