Heya, Liz! Casanova here with a short review!
Anyway, I know this is a fandom poem so I won't be delving too much into it, but I'll hit the basics.
Do you know of the red roses?
The roses of the salty, dark sea.
Have you seen a mouse, a mouse with a name, in London lately?
Now, I know it's fandom so these lines don't make sense when you don't know the TV series or the movie series that you're referencing. And that was a down putter, I figured I'd at least get something out of this like you naming the fandom. I only know the fandom from asking you, however. Anyway, onward.
A face waits in the middle of time, waiting for your response.
Smith and Jones
Noble and Lord
Pond and Williams, intergalactic humans
A river leads to an Oswald but when is the end
Anyway, this one right here actually gives me a bit of stuff to play around with, and I enjoyed that. You have the first line which makes sense without you telling me what it's from, and I felt like that was a step up. The lines after make me wonder about what else it could possibly be about, and wonder.. Well, that's always a good thing. The last line, though, would be strictly for the fandom and doesn't mean anything else besides the Dr.Who fandom, which I've never even watched Dr.Who.
Anyway, that's all I have to say on this one and I hope it helped.
Keep on doing what you're doing and keep on keeping on.
Your battle partner, Crowley
Points: 3571
Reviews: 624
Donate