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Too me, it was merely a convesational piece. It didn't seem to be a poem. I guess ot someone else it is, but for me it wasn't. You're obviously talking ...

My child, my angel, and still to this day, She's beautiful and perfect in every single way. Take out "single" "I cry all the time and ask God why, He ...

I have to be honest, I was loving it (even though the colors were hurting my eyes) until the third stanza. Perhaps all that that came after it wasn't necessary. ...

Overall, a poem a lot of people could relate to. A little redundant and of course it's the "c" word as well, but I'll leave that alone this time around. ...

Gosh, I wonder if this stuff came out of my mind when I was thirteen. Suicides are very typical to write about. Especially when you're just starting out and you ...

I'm really sorry that you live in the shadow of your brother but this poem was practically a re-make of Ashlee Simpon's Shadow. But I don't know. Perhaps that's what ...

I didn't understand it...especially the first word but I loved the imagery and word usage. The part about the pretty little emo boys was good even though it's becoming a ...

I have a hard time relating to romantic poetry, stories or anything. However, it wasn't that complicated with this one, I guess it's because I sort of know you. I ...

*Chokes On Tears* Why...why...why tonight ? Anyway, this poem is hard to critique when I was able to relate so well. Granite, half the imagery was completely irrelevant to my ...

It sort of had a kind of provacative sense to it which made it exciting. I love the metaphors...I think those a called metaphors...anyway, the way you connected the middle ...

I personally would have not put the parentheses there but I think they were okay, here. Maybe it you shouldn't put so many of them but then again I don't ...

"shady boy shaped figures, lean and beautiful against the blackness, concentrating on the scribbling of black pens on grey walls. there is a feeling that the world stopped for us, ...

This seemed like something that came straight of a Todd Strasser novel. It was very realistic, yet I wasn't really able to connect. Maybe because I've never been to a ...

Well, it's definitely a poem of reminds me of how this certain kid speaks to me,lol. God. I'm glad my mom didn't see this when she walked by my computer ...

The cracks in your windshield make the street split and wind, wind . Did you mean "wind" as in winding something up or like "wind" as in...the air? I think ...