Charm

Hey! Just a quick review! I really liked this poem and I just really loved the idea. The rhyming was great and didn't feel forced at all. The last line ...

Hey Guys! I really liked this poem and it's awesome to see you two together, writing together! I didn't find anything wrong with this poem except like I thought some ...

Hey! I'm really glad you're back and I can tell that you're poetry has gotten better. I don't have much to say that relates to improving this poem because I ...

Hey! I really liked this haiku and I know how hard they are to write. I love the idea of summer and ants and sweat. It's relatable and it's simple ...

Hey! Just a quick review! I would really to see the first paragraph as a prologue and just like put it before the Chapter 1 title because then I would ...

Hey! Here's just a few things I notice and/or thought when reading your lovely poem :) ~ "or something of the sort." This line confused me a bit. I felt ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem. Here are my thoughts on the work: ~ But I have got a feeling some like wine. This line doesn't make sense. Are ...

Hey! I really loved this poem! And I love it so much that I want it to be improved by these small things: ~Adding punctuation. Please! I think that punctuation ...

Hey! I really liked this poem and I really liked the length. I think if you add proper grammar and if you made it less confusing it will improve the ...

Hey! First of all welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here and find it helps you write more! If you have any questions feel free to ask me ...

Hey! I really liked this poem. I found myself relating to it a lot. I feel like it would improve if you added proper punctuation and maybe added stanzas. I ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem! Sorry this is short ;-; "they look sad." This seemed a little plain. I know you can do better. Try adding more descriptions. ...

Hey! I really liked this poem. The rhyming was perfect. It didn't feel forced at all and the flow of the poem was awesome! I think once you add punctuation ...

Hey! I'm here to review your interesting piece. I really love short short stories xD I didn't know that hobbling was a word xD but I guess you learn something ...

Hey! I was instantly attracted to this poem since I deal with anxiety daily and it sucks! I've also felt depression and just ugh. Mental illnesses suck, I feel your ...