Chandni

The only negative remark I have in store is that I'd rather see failed instead of fails in the last line. I know not much about Van Gogh, except for ...

This poem felt like a rollercoaster to me, some of the lines impressed me and delivered strong emotions, beautifully worded. I gave up so much for us, So I could ...

This reminds of sleep paralysis which I happen to experience sometimes. Your lines flow well and neatly. I like your word usage, and the rhyme from time to time. Something ...

You managed to pull of a rhyme scene that didn't annoy me as much as others tend to do. At some parts it does sound a bit forced and you ...

Hmmm there isn't much criticism I can give without correcting quite a few things. One thing is noticable, and that is that you applied an aabbcc patterned rhyme. That is ...

Partly, looking at word use and the way you broke up your lines, it lacks one another. But that could just be the thing making this poem stand out as ...

Okay, I think the idea behind this pretty o.k. even though I find this sitting on the edge of being cliche, it's still not that overused. The description was low, ...

Okay, let's start off nice and slowly here. To my concern, there was a huge lack of flow here. In between the stanza's there did happen to be a bit ...

Started out smooth with a nice usage of words, lines were short and showed flow :) I liked your adjectives, you described well. To bottle it up, it was a ...

I had a global look, and notice that there is a "me" at the end of almost every line. Which I thought would be a bit repetitive, quite the contrary. ...

It was short, a bit too short actually. But I quite liked the message behind it. I have not much to say here, only that it could've been more descriptive. ...

Definitely pleasant :) There's not much I can say here, only that you shouldn't capitalize every single line ;) It was a nice read, you parted your line breaks and ...

Ahaa, this was a pleasant read indeed :) unlike many same-topic poems on YWS this one definitely sticks out. You've managed to put your feelings down in a way that ...

I believe this isn't poetry-like at all, it sounds more like a non-fictional piece merely explaining an opinion? Most of it has to do with the structure and the lack ...

First of all it didn't "wow" me. The title already sounded like something I've heard before, but still I gave it a look. Despite myself thinking of it being something ...