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Re: The desire for motherhood
Hi cherie! I really love the exploration of motherhood through the lens of faith. Despite faith not being a consistent thing in my personal life, I can appreciate its involvement ...
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Re: everything within
Hi Prudence! I know this has already left the green room, but it caught my eye and I thought I may as well leave a short review! I love a ...
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Re: secondhand smoke
Hi sophiesangel! Going into this and immediately getting confronted with imagery of smoking was both captivating and jarring! I love the idea of a relationship being like a bad habit, ...
Jun 9 -
Re: 2 am thoughts
Hi SpunkyMonkey! Here for just a quick review today. This really embodies the hyperaware, delirious qualities that being awake in the middle of the night elicits. Noticing every sound around ...
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Re: The Dimming of My Grandfather’s Light
Hi Nethmi! Saw this in the green room and thought I'd check it out — and I can't believe I haven't read this earlier! The subject here is so genuine ...
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Re: tasteless dreams
Hey all! A collaborative poem is such a cool idea! I like that each contributor is highlighted a different color and the lines were evenly spread out among each of ...
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Re: William’s nightmare
Hello creeperfeverdreams! Unfortunately, I am not familiar with FNAF lore (I know, I live under a rock), so this will all be me taking this story out of context from ...
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Re: save me
Hi rainforest! Beautiful username and beautiful poem. I know this is out of the green room already, but I still wanted to share my thoughts especially because this is a ...
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Re: to my favorite angel
Hello GengarTheGhost! This is laced with a lot of vulnerability. Themes of dark/light and heaven/hell and cold/hot is expressed consistently throughout. The comfort the speaker's brother brings is ver
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Re: New Years recollections //
Hello oirichu! Here for a quick review. I like the journey this poem takes us on. We start more general, reflecting on new year traditions and questioning the purpose of ...
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Re: rosso / rojo / red
Hello Genevieve! This is such a heartwarming, romantic poem. Associating a color to a feeling reminds me a lot of other media (for some reason, Red by Taylor Swift is ...
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Re: ***
Hi Ravena! You've captured what I imagine pageantry to feel like very well! There's an overarching dark tone in the poem — the emphasis on perfection and the pressure faced ...
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Re: Andrea and Carter at the dance
Hello creeperfeverdreams! Just a short review today. I like the vibes this little vignette/story carries - a simple feeling of young love and finding comfort in company. Not too much ...
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Re: Father's Dad
Hi Alex! Thank you for sharing this vulnerable poem - I'm so sorry for your loss. This is obviously an emotional and raw subject matter, and it takes a lot ...
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Re: Crickets
Hello! Stopping by for a quick review! I love that the rhyme scheme makes the poem read very lyrically throughout; each line flows well! It contrasts to the darker themes ...
Sep 7, 2025
