Caerulean

Hello. :) Nice title. Nitpicks: sitting up there all alone. - This is too short for the lengthy line that came before it. Maybe, change 'all' with 'completely'. so pale, ...

Hello there. :) First of all, that's a really nice title. :smt023 The picture is nice too and looks cool, especially the web covering that opening. The openings a little ...

Hello there. :) Rudely speaking, the title (including the topic) is cliché. >.< I think you could've come up with a better title for this. Nitpicks: To be held by ...

Hello. :) That is one interesting but simple title. xD Well, I think the first letters of 'night sky' should be capitalized. Nitpicks: The night sky expands over the world ...

Hello there. :) Short poems seem to have become a trend lately. xD Nitpicks: Flowing through your being, silently - Put a period after 'silently' since this is a full ...

Hello there. :) I already saw this on the featured list like three days ago but didn't read 'cause I don't like the name in the title xD, but I ...

Hello there. :) I didn't expect that mine would be the first review lol. I added this on my reading list like two days ago. xD Nitpicks: Boom. Crash. Bang. ...

Hello there. :) Nitpicks: I'm too cold you say and take your blankets to the couch. - Put a comma after 'cold' and 'say' - Also, I didn't get the ...

Hello. :) I've got two nitpicks for you: from city noise - I think there should be a 'the' before 'city'. and the world, that is confused and puzzled. - ...

Hello there. :) Nitpicks: The the beast finds me. - Typo: You typed 'the' twice. I am out breath again, - You forgot to put 'of' after 'out'. my mind ...

Hello there. :) Nitpicks: A creature of mystery, - I don't think the comma after 'mystery' is necessary. The separation of the lines, in my opinion, already create pause. A ...

Hello there! :D When I first read the title, I misread it and thought it was 'I Don't Wanna Hear My Pants Anymore!' XD Nitpicks: I bent over forwards, No ...

Hello there. :) I only have two nitpicks: because you don’t panic when headlights light your eyes. - The 'headlights light' seems redundant. I think you can reword the 'light' ...

Hello there. :D Nitpicks: yet still I wish, - I think there should be a comma after 'yet'. In my dreams I see, a painfully beautiful prince, - There shouldn't ...

Hello there. :) Nitpicks: I sat out on the baking concrete, blisters on my palms. - The 'blisters on my palms' seemed to appear out of nowhere. It's not related ...