Butterfinger

Hey to everyone! I'm new, but I have a strong passion for writing in many different styles....here's something to start with, tell me what you think! Let the rain fallMy ...

I wrote this one on a dark day, not really knowing what it meant to me...I just let the words flow from my pen onto the page....tell me what you ...

Tell me what you much beautyErupted from a seedVelvet petals of pinkSo fragile, like chinaLike the skin of an angelGlowing, angelicThe sun pouring life downInto its soulLike sugar it shinesRadiant ...

Please comment and critique.....When I wake, I'll live for youWhen I sleep, I'll pray for youWhen I dream, I'll dream of you, alwaysAnd the day I die, you can bet, ...

Wow, I haven't been on here in a while.....but I need to know what you think about this piece....have at it!My body lies under the dirtA corpse, cold and stiff.They ...

I need your honesty opinions....You lied to my facelooked deep in my eyestold me you loved mefilled me with lies.You smothered my lightDosed me in gasNever thought I was betterthen ...

It's a rough start, but here goes.....Darkness calls me from the shadowsClawing at my hemsGnashing rotten teethPuffing foul gutter breath..Whispering my nameIn tongues I seem to knowLurking 'round the

Ok, so as always, my inspiration seems to come from the weirdest places and I can't imagine where this one came from. Anyways, Review, Critique, Rip, Tear, Applaud, Yawn, do ...

Have you ever had a moment when all you want to do is run? Well, here's my side...sorta...Critique! She runsLegs pumpingWind rushingBlood hammeringShe runsAway from hurtDark daysDarker nightsShe runsM

Please feel free to voice your thoughts, spill your rants, I'm open to your Critique! You build me upTo tear me downYou spread your smileLike a stupid clown.You cut me ...

This came out when my house was heck-tic and music and yelling rang through the halls...tell my what thou thinkest! Stitches on a striped skin. Layers going all which ways. ...

Ok, not my best, but it's a first try to an ODE. Tell me what you think!It sits thereDay after dayWaiting to be warmedBy a passing bumUrning for the sun ...

Ok, not sure how I feel about this one, but I need feedback! It doesn't matter what you have to say-say it. Enjoy! A colony of ants marchMarching across desertsDaring ...

This is rough and spur of the moment, but tell me what you think!Green is the edge of grass, shooting up in springgreen is the color of my fingerwhen I ...

I've been trying out just sitting down at my keyboard and typing away, just to see what comes out. I'd love some critique, good hard, gooey critique!! He sits there ...

Life is full of heart achewith a severed chesta blood trail leading down the halla closed door hiding a loved onewith barred teethwielding an ax to guard a deadly secretit's ...

Like a shadow he enters my realm, my solitude Darkening my thoughts and purging the light.He whispers harsh, seductive, daring wordsPulling me to desperate action.Planting a scene of scarlet bloodHow ...

I posted this a while ago, but only got 1 review! Awwww! If you click this, review it! Rip and Critique please! Like a shadow he enters my realm, my ...

Hey everybody! I want to see just as many reviews as there are views! So if you click it, review it! Say what you have to say! Let me know ...

Tried writing something different. longer but I hope not too choppy.