BookOholic22

hey! i am bookoholic here for a review!welcome to YWS. i agree with Elisium. but i guess this is your first poem and there is a long way to improve. ...

hey bloodstring, bookoholic22 here for a review. your poem was very fragile piece, as it had those emotions in words. you could have made it more powerful by adding some ...

Hey!! I am bookoholic22 here for a review!! This piece is something which i could relate to.. The reason being is something like this happened with me.. my best friend ...

Hey! I am bookoholic22 here for a review. Great work! The theme was very good and so was the title. I think you need to add a full stop after ...

Hey abdullah786! I am bookoholic22 here for a review.. First of all *claps* for your work. It is not easy to write a poem. A poem is a collection of ...

Hey keepwriting! I am bookoholic22 here for a short review. "From your cage you watch As people walk about being cheery" Overhere, something feels off the track. I mean how ...

Hey TZH!! I am back with a review. This is a great poem! How you express journey of a new born pasing through teenage, then adulthood , and other different ...

Hey fangirldivergent46! So this was a great work by you because thoughts flowed like feelings. Like what you feel. The title was incredible and what a thought girl! And truly ...

hey TZH! I am happy to be here to review on your work. so, i really liked the theme. How you connect the parts of body to the truth of ...

hey bestie!! so this poem is really connected to me and everyone here! and my name itself suggests the title! i am very impressed by the line My mom always ...

Hey sound of mind! I think that your title was something unique! A person, hiding tears behind that smile. GREAT thought! " I’m sure that if you found out then ...

Hi lyricalrebel!! I really liked what you wrote because there was something which connected me to it. the title adopted by you was wonderful. i really liked your writing style. ...

Heya klennon!! Now your poem really had a sense of expression. Your title 'doubt' is really attractive and truely attracts a reader! Now coming to suggestions I think that u ...

hi there!! so, firstly i would like to tell you that i really liked your imagination to write on this topic. your thoughts were really something which would inspire many ...

hey fangirl!! so i don"t write too much but i love literature!! so coming to your poetry. it is really an inspiration and more importantly its the truth. and we ...