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Re: The Guardians chapter one part one
Hello there, Snoops! I'm just going to hop in real quick for a review which hopefully helps you out! This was a pretty interesting idea! I mean, voices in your ...
Jul 21, 2017 -
Re: Attack
Hello there! Mind if I hop in for a review? Hopefully this will help you and your writing to grow and improve! The first thing I want to point out ...
Jul 21, 2017 -
Re: 3 a.m.
Hello, @gxldencrxwns! I'll be reviewing your work. The description of this story definitely intrigued me to read this! It was very interesting yet mysterious; I wanted to know more, so ...
Jul 20, 2017 -
Re: Ransom
Yo, @Queenie! I'll be reviewing this piece for you. Let me start with some quick and easy things, like small nitpicks of my opinion. Then I'll look at some other ...
Apr 19, 2017 -
Re: Beauty
Hello, OreosAreLife ! What a beautiful poem you have here, haha! I found spelling to be somewhat of an issue that could be fixed in this poem. Here are some ...
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: Prison of Silence
Hey there, Queenie! How are you? Since this should be a quite relatable topic to many people, I'd like to start by saying this was a good subject to create ...
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: Daily Tasks
Hey there, @ks2017! I'll be stopping by to review this real quick. Let me point out a few small nitpicks here and there. This should be pretty quick/simple; hopefully they ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: deleted
Hey there, @CrazyCattle21! Nice poem you got here. I would love to review this! :D Something that could be changed, was you tended to write "the void" at the beginning ...
Apr 8, 2017 -
Re: I Want to Believe You
Hey there, @2001cvs! I'll be reviewing your poem for today. Nice piece, by the way! I love the strength in the message here; the ending was quite good, too. Nitpicks ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: Spring's Song
Hi, @pensive! Nice poem here. Beautiful use of rhyme and words. I'd like to point out a couple nitpicks that I think could be changed. The sun revives the dormant ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: Colours of life .
Hey there! I will be reviewing your article today. Since I don't normally review articles, this may be a little different for me. Forgive me if I mix anything up! ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: Gamer Poem
Hello there, @Ferruccio1234567! What a cute little poem you have here. I will be reviewing this, but it may be a short review for there isn't a whole lot to ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: Important Parts
Hey there. I'll review your short story. Let me point out some nitpicks. It was a small room, but very alive and excited. I don't see how a room could ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: Happiness Is a Choice
Hello there, @Niteesh! Forgive me if I am incorrect on any of the points I make; I don't usually review articles. There are some moments that make u forget the ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: Horrors I Must Face
Hey. :D So, I'll point out a couple of little nitpicks here and there, and hopefully this review will help you some! Inside i feel Nothing really wrong with this, ...
Apr 1, 2017
