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BlueSunset

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Guardians chapter one part one

    Hello there, Snoops! I'm just going to hop in real quick for a review which hopefully helps you out! This was a pretty interesting idea! I mean, voices in your ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Attack

    Hello there! Mind if I hop in for a review? Hopefully this will help you and your writing to grow and improve! The first thing I want to point out ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: 3 a.m.

    Hello, @gxldencrxwns! I'll be reviewing your work. The description of this story definitely intrigued me to read this! It was very interesting yet mysterious; I wanted to know more, so ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ransom

    Yo, @Queenie! I'll be reviewing this piece for you. Let me start with some quick and easy things, like small nitpicks of my opinion. Then I'll look at some other ...

    Apr 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Beauty

    Hello, OreosAreLife ! What a beautiful poem you have here, haha! I found spelling to be somewhat of an issue that could be fixed in this poem. Here are some ...

    Apr 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Prison of Silence

    Hey there, Queenie! How are you? Since this should be a quite relatable topic to many people, I'd like to start by saying this was a good subject to create ...

    Apr 15, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Daily Tasks

    Hey there, @ks2017! I'll be stopping by to review this real quick. Let me point out a few small nitpicks here and there. This should be pretty quick/simple; hopefully they ...

    Apr 13, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: deleted

    Hey there, @CrazyCattle21! Nice poem you got here. I would love to review this! :D Something that could be changed, was you tended to write "the void" at the beginning ...

    Apr 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: I Want to Believe You

    Hey there, @2001cvs! I'll be reviewing your poem for today. Nice piece, by the way! I love the strength in the message here; the ending was quite good, too. Nitpicks ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Spring's Song

    Hi, @pensive! Nice poem here. Beautiful use of rhyme and words. I'd like to point out a couple nitpicks that I think could be changed. The sun revives the dormant ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Realistic Re: Colours of life .

    Hey there! I will be reviewing your article today. Since I don't normally review articles, this may be a little different for me. Forgive me if I mix anything up! ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Gamer Poem

    Hello there, @Ferruccio1234567! What a cute little poem you have here. I will be reviewing this, but it may be a short review for there isn't a whole lot to ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: Important Parts

    Hey there. I'll review your short story. Let me point out some nitpicks. It was a small room, but very alive and excited. I don't see how a room could ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Happiness Is a Choice

    Hello there, @Niteesh! Forgive me if I am incorrect on any of the points I make; I don't usually review articles. There are some moments that make u forget the ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: Horrors I Must Face

    Hey. :D So, I'll point out a couple of little nitpicks here and there, and hopefully this review will help you some! Inside i feel Nothing really wrong with this, ...

    Apr 1, 2017


As ideas are always better than their execution, so too must dough taste better than cookies.
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