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Hey there, Collideascope. On a scale from one to ten this poem is probably an eight. It's very good. The title really gets us into the mood. "Second to Everything." ...

Hey there, Gaki! I wasn't really sure what kind of piece this was. Still not sure. But it does portray some great ideas. I enjoyed reading it. A few things ...

Hi there, silverlady99. To start off, your poem is good. It's a general idea we're all used to: love. Therefore, it's easy to understand the feelings described and all that. ...

Hi Castiel, I'm here with a review for your poem! :) I will start out by saying I don't always enjoy reading poems, but I did enjoy this one. Great ...

Hey there! The poem was pretty good. I must say it started out better and went down a bit. I got the idea of the poem. However, it could have ...

Hi, myjaspercat. I'm going to first say this is a pretty good poem. It's written very well, and one can tell that you thought it through. The only think I ...

Hello Dragongirl, I am here to leave you a review. First of all, let me say I thought this poem was amazing! I really enjoyed it. Secondly, you chose great ...

Hello! I am here to leave a review. Your poem was good. Your choice of words was well thought. The title caught attention. However, I don't exactly know how to ...

Hey there! Very good work. I enjoyed reading your poem. What I really liked was how you built up one on top of the other. She was broken. She fled. ...

Hey there! First of all I would like to say, I think this poem is really good. I enjoyed reading it. The idea and all. Great development. Maybe something that ...

Wow, I like it. You had a great variety of words. You also had vivid expression. I love the feelings that the poem points out. I've felt this way so ...

Hello! :D Amazing work on this short story. I have to say, I loved it. The desperate, sad, and depressed state in which the man finds himself is portrayed beautifully. ...

Hey there :) First of all, I'd just like to say how much I enjoyed reading this. I find myself asking the same questions sometimes. I like your word usage, ...

Hi!! Very detailed poem. You may have gotten too caught up in the way the body was persecuted and hurt, but I like the vivid descriptions. Your poem shows great ...

Hi musiclover11, Reading this short story, made me feel sick to my stomach in a way, and yet to feel compassion as well. The story could have been colored a ...