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BhavyaMehta123

  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Distant Lover

    Hii!!! Welcome to YWS. Oh! YOU’RE ALL MINE AS LONG AS I LIVE, I SAY AS I WATCH YOU FROM A DISTANCE - This line took my heart! Being a ...

    May 13, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: What is Happiness?

    Hello there! This has been a very interesting and a poem full of insights. A poem which is filled with many questions and has been able to intrigue my interest ...

    Apr 8, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the inevitable

    This is such an overwhelming piece. As I read this I just flew along with it. The fact that this feels something like own. The way you poured your emotions ...

    Oct 3, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: What is Holding You Back?

    A powerful piece and something which is so less discussed. To let go is powerful as well as important and this is something you beautifully highlighted. In this world where ...

    Oct 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Strength

    This poem has a lot of potential. It touched my heart. The title given piqued my interest. This is such a relatable piece. Every teenager's life reality. This poem has ...

    Oct 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Never again

    Hi this is a beautiful poem. It touched my heart and it was overwhelming in ways. This journey you undertook and you shared with us all- is so brave. This ...

    Oct 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Yes that's me

    Talking about the piece from a technical point of view. Its a well written and flawless one. Its short simple and conveys the idea so well. Loved this poem!!! Lots ...

    Mar 10, 2021
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Hey! I loved this poem. I am too partially a nerd and was fully one some years back. This poem was great. Sprinkled with element of humour, a nerd taking ...

    Sep 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: When You Know He's Not Coming Back

    Hi! Although a short but a truly heartbreaking poem. The wait for someone kills and in the end when they pass into nothingness. Somewhere I have experienced this. This filled ...

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lives That Matter

    Hi! This is a great poem honouring everyone's life. The issue raised and the message given through this is so genuine and brought a smile on my face. Through your ...

    Sep 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: People Say

    Hi! What people say, think or do has always pulled me. And those last lines are so true. Somewhere this poem is a short description of my life and I ...

    Sep 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Frittering away

    Hi! As I went through the poem I was like, " This is me" Procrastination is like blood running in our veins. The poem is exceptionally well- written. I loved ...

    Jun 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: पहचान औरत की

    Hi ! As beautiful and as heart touching as the last one. You are nailing it in Hindi. This poem is short but lovely. You proved worth of women in ...

    Jun 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: What Some People Say

    Hi! This is such a worthy, lovely and beautiful poem. I can't even express what I am feeling right now. I am so happy about the fact that acceptance is ...

    Jun 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: कुछ पलों की आज़ादियां

    Hi! I am the reviewer you are looking for. To be honest, it is a beautiful poem on my very own and favourite theme-childhood. The vocabulary you have used is ...

    Jun 5, 2020


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