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Things that I liked: I liked the flow of the poem, it was a nice pace for this style. It seems to be the exact thoughts of someone drowning. I ...

Things to work on: First off you need to remember that you are supposed to capitalize the first word of every sentence. In a poem this is important. Also in ...

Notes: I think it is a little to sad. Also try putting a age limit in it. It was too dark for me to read. I don't think that all ...

I loved it! I think that it is very true. I like that it is short and simple. I love the very beginning when you say "Love is nothing but ...

I think that it was great! Just a few notes: How did you think of that name? What does her mother say? Who is the figure? Can you make the ...

It was very ominous. I like how you used punctuation and your grammar was excellent. This poem was interesting because it gave me an old fashion hunting feel. "This is ...

I love it, very simple but passionate. It is sad that it is dying, but I understand that this is your viewing on the situation. I like the part about ...

Too long to be a poem! Too short to be a short story! Try not to use faces when you write poems the readers need to feel the emotion when ...

I think this was a nice poem. I enjoyed the emotion you put into it. You must be very allergic to mint. I hope that you don't eat mint any ...

So you really need to rewrite that because you don't have a proper format. To write a limerick you nee a pattern: The lines 1,2, and the last line 5 ...

I like acrostic poems. This is a nice simple word that you put into six lines. I hope that you make other poems with longer words. I like the line ...

I can relate to this, I have moved a lot in my life. You are really good at writing your feelings and telling a story in your poem. The emotion ...

It is a little sad.The title of the poem said that it was all okay but it felt extremely sad. But it had a great story line! I hope that ...

A unique topic that people like me love. A true story within a few short lings. A nice description of a woman who obviously is a master of the heart. ...

Use capitals at the beginning of every line, because it helps us understand the beginning and end of the lings. You might half to use spaces and commas more wisely. ...