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tell me the story about how the sun loved the moon so much he died every night to let her breathe.

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Wonderland

    Hello there, caitiemfetters. This is Moonwatcher here for day two of Review Month. Wonderland. Nice. But I suggest maybe adding a bit of metaphor here and there. Nothing really stands ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i am a compulsive candle lighter.

    Sup, LuciferWaffleWildPenguin. MoonAngelFrogBlanketTowel here with a RevMo review. I've read this before, and it's a shame that it's still in the Green Room. SO here I am to kick this ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To be happy

    Hey, Pernicus. This is Moonwatcher, here with my first review for RevMo. I'm not so good at introductions, so all I can say here is that I like this poem. ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Drowning

    Hello there, ReignRose1997. This is Moonwatcher and I'll be your reviewer for today. Okies, an anxiety poem, directed towards social anxiety. I feel this could be directed toward anxiety, in ...

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Lady Lilith

    Hello, TheStormAroundMe. This is Moonwatcher, and I'm here to review your poem. Alright, so I'm kind of trying to ignore the painting at the top there. It'd make it kind ...

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Lullaby

    Hello, Divergent Demigod. This is Moonwatcher and I'll be your reviewer today. Alright, a poem about cutting. Ouch. Personally, I don't relate, so I apologize if I don't agree too ...

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Romantic Re: Ghost

    Hey there, serendipitous. This is Moonwatcher and I'll be your reviewer for today. This is neat, but I agree that this poem has a little bit of a forced rhyme. ...

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: As Simple as the Snow Falls

    Hello, 5319Kyle. This is Moonwatcher, and I'll be your reviewer for today. I noticed you're pretty new to this site, so welcome to YWS! I hope you've enjoyed your time ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Wish "it" was that simple

    Hey, Divergent Demigod. This is Moonwatcher and I'll be your reviewer today. First, I shall begin with the title. Alright, I get it. "I wish 'it' was that simple". Now ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter

    Hey, SnazzyPencil! (nice name) This is Moonwatcher here with a review. Apologies if this is short, I'm on mobile, and that can be dreadful. However, I shall try my best ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Biological Family Truths

    Hey, 5kKitty. I feel like Clogs covered a lot of the poem, so I apologize if this is a bit of a repeat. I'm on mobile, so this may be ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Your Values

    Hey KingQueenKnave~ This is perfect because I am on mobile and this is short so here we go. let the finger pain commence Well I really don't know what to ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Alone with my Thoughts

    Hey MayaM! I had already read this before and encouraged your posting of this. Congratulations on the spotlight! You ordered an honest review, so here I am~ I'm going to ...

    Jul 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: The Fall

    Hello, khendraaiden! Congratulations on posting your first work. I noticed you joined today, so welcome to YWS! Let's get to the review~ The wind pulls me forward, asking me to ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Begin again

    Hello there, Divergent Demigod! So obviously this is a poem about not giving up. It's a good moral to stick to. I like the repeating pattern of "Begin again" at ...

    Jun 18, 2016


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