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Re: Life Without Regrets [Chapter One]- Edited
Asteria here with a review! Let me start by saying you've got me intrigued. I want to know why he's being accused (and convicted) of this murder, why he's no ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Cigarettes
Hey, Weymouth! Asteria here with a review. Let me just begin by saying that what you've written, the depth that this poem goes, is one I wasn't initially prepared for. ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: The Wedding
Alright, lets get down to business! (To defeat...the Huns!) You've got me curious. Though you had an author's not saying that you're not good at writing in first person and ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: I waited for you
Though you already know my feelings on this piece, I'll write them again to make them all the more permanent: This poem is perfect. Each word was written with purpose, ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: True Love
This poem made me laugh so hard while reading it. I had come in expecting something entirely different, anticipating someone leaning in, going in for that kiss. That image was ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: The Flamenco
Where to start? I can feel the initial pull, this attraction to the woman who Sara spotted in the crowd as though it were my own. I feel as though ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: My character's bios~Sidney's Children Meets Youtube(Part 1)
Though this isn't a story in and of itself, I felt the urge to review it nonetheless! Overall, I feel as though each description of a character reads like a ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Cobalt Apocalypse
Hey there! Asteria here with a review. The first thing that I noticed was the lack of punctuation save for the very ending. Was it a stylistic choice to have ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Lovely Mayhem
Hey, there! Asteria here with a review. The only thing I truly have to say is that I love this piece. It's simplistic without being too simplistic. Deep without overwhelming ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Listening
Hey there! I love how this reads, your use of capitalization and the lack of to stress points. My only question would be in the formatting itself. Was it, too, ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Moles
Hey, there! Asteria here with a review! Now, as a person who has spent their fair share of time connecting their own moles or freckles, this piece made me laugh ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: 1
Hey, there! Asteria here for a review. What's there to say about a poem that wrote itself? It's wonderful. You ask questions that most would ask those who are secretive, ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Removed at the author's request
You've hooked me. The idea, while it's one that has been told before and is a common concept, looks like it could go in so many different directions that I ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: Honeydew Hollow: Natalie's Tale
Hey, Asteria here with a review! The first thing that I noticed is the formatting in this piece. For the most part, it's not jarring in the slightest. There are ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: perspective
Hey, it's Asteria here with a review! First, let me just say that this poem is...extremely deep, something I can relate to on a number of levels. It's something that ...
Jun 22, 2014
