ArdenJinn

Hey Revolt20! It's MrytleJinn here for a review. I really like the metaphor here of struggling with something constantly and not being about to make it through. I'm staying still ...

Hey, AlexWrites! MrytleJinn here for a review. This is honestly super interesting and I like all the different themes woven in! Onto the review, I'm the star of the ball- ...

Hey, calix123! It's MrytleJinn here for a review. I may be slightly biased seeing as we share the same poetry style. But into the review! sometimes love is gentle and ...

Hey MaanGroen! Welcome! Let's get into this. I thought this was really interesting to explore so I had to read it. The perfect childhood, we all yearn for it. Your ...

Hi minimeow! I was looking for something short to review and this caught my eye! My cat is crazy. Or at least apathetic. She watches bugs bang themselves Against glass ...

I read this and I had to sit down and think. This is so good and it brings something to light that really needs to be. Alright. Into the review! ...

Hi, lavletter! I really related to this story and knew I had to write a review. So here I am! I have always felt like an outsider in my own ...

Hey, vemalekhya! I'm here for a review! Hi. My name is Earth, I have to tell you something. This is a really good introduction. It's almost like the intro of ...

Hi! I normally review poetry so I decided to try something new! Thanks for suggesting your story. Alright, overall this has a lot of promise. There are some spelling and ...

Hey! So I was reading this and, yeah, it doesn't flow quite right. But that's okay. Anyways. Into the review! I wish you could see How beautiful you painted the ...

Short and sweet and so beautiful. Amazing. I'm a very delusional poet And she's a poem Which I never wrote. The speaker almost seems to be discrediting themself. Trying to ...

Wow, Junebug. Just wow. This is amazing. Why can't I just exist? Why must you break me down to build me up? The questioning is what brings this to life. ...

Short and sweet. I know that with each puff, I am brought closer to my death. I know that with each inhale, I fail my body. This sets it up ...

Alright, let's get down to business. I read this and was immediately transported into this place. The sensory details are amazing. The sound of the creek is a beautiful gift ...

I loved this, thinking of the future and who you could have. The thing that hurts the most is that if I had asked when I had a chance, she ...