Young Writers Society

Hello, Minigregs2! Welcome to YWS :D I think that this is a very interesting story thus far, it's very intriguing and makes me want to read on. I like how ...

Hey Evvy! I think that each chapter gets more and more interesting and I'm glad that another character was introduced here. Not only that, it has raised a bunch of ...

Hi beg I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours! madting. Okay well I'll try and be as formal as possible but I think I've already messed that up. ...

Hey Evvy! I have returned to review the other chapters. This part seems like the most exciting to me so far, as in far less repetitive and left on a ...

Hello! So returning to a point of my last review, I think I understand more now why Elena is leading Margaret to that room. I found this chapter a bit ...

Hi LadyEvvy! Right let's get straight into this review. I do like how the story is progressing, although I have a couple of questions about this chapter alone I do ...

Hey again! So the perspective change threw me off initially, but I actually enjoyed this chapter much much more, and here is why. There seems to be more of an ...

Hi, LadyEvvy! I agree with Noelle, I really like the premise of this story that it's about children who get sent to this place when the adults get tired of ...

Hey, ShianneeMariee, and welcome to YWS!! Okay let's jump straight into the review, I'll start with what I liked. The background of this story seems really interesting and unique, with ...

Hey, cg26 Right, I feel like this story escalated very quickly, I mean when I was reading it I was just thinking 'man this MC is whiny' and then the ...

Hello, SergeantRosie! Honestly, I really really enjoyed reading this. I mean, sci-fi and stories set in the future are always pretty interesting, but this has a strong appeal to me ...

Hello, cavalin! The rhythm of this is great, everything flows really nicely so I can imagine some lyrics being put with this too. I like the chorus part, and the ...

Hi DIAMOND! I like the idea behind these lyrics. At a first look, it seems that it's going to something quite specific, which I like. I do have a few ...

Hello, SharraeWilson! I can definitely imagine these lyrics put along with some kind of tune, the rhythm is definitely there. I liked hook/chorus part which was repeated, and I also ...

Hello, SoundsofLife! I liked these lyrics because they were filled with so much emotion and I think that that's what really made it different. I'm used to reading quite generic ...