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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: White Rose Republic

    Hello, Minigregs2! Welcome to YWS :D I think that this is a very interesting story thus far, it's very intriguing and makes me want to read on. I like how ...

    Mar 31, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy
    Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Six

    Hey Evvy! I think that each chapter gets more and more interesting and I'm glad that another character was introduced here. Not only that, it has raised a bunch of ...

    Jan 3, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Sherbet Lemons: Chapter 1

    Hi beg I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours! madting. Okay well I'll try and be as formal as possible but I think I've already messed that up. ...

    Jan 3, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Five

    Hey Evvy! I have returned to review the other chapters. This part seems like the most exciting to me so far, as in far less repetitive and left on a ...

    Jan 3, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy
    Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Four

    Hello! So returning to a point of my last review, I think I understand more now why Elena is leading Margaret to that room. I found this chapter a bit ...

    Dec 30, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Three

    Hi LadyEvvy! Right let's get straight into this review. I do like how the story is progressing, although I have a couple of questions about this chapter alone I do ...

    Dec 30, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy
    Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Two

    Hey again! So the perspective change threw me off initially, but I actually enjoyed this chapter much much more, and here is why. There seems to be more of an ...

    Dec 30, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy
    Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter One

    Hi, LadyEvvy! I agree with Noelle, I really like the premise of this story that it's about children who get sent to this place when the adults get tired of ...

    Dec 30, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Running

    Hey, ShianneeMariee, and welcome to YWS!! Okay let's jump straight into the review, I'll start with what I liked. The background of this story seems really interesting and unique, with ...

    Dec 14, 2015

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Knives

    Hey, cg26 Right, I feel like this story escalated very quickly, I mean when I was reading it I was just thinking 'man this MC is whiny' and then the ...

    Dec 9, 2015

  • Short Story » Politics, Science Fiction
    Re: My Decision

    Hello, SergeantRosie! Honestly, I really really enjoyed reading this. I mean, sci-fi and stories set in the future are always pretty interesting, but this has a strong appeal to me ...

    Dec 6, 2015

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General
    Re: The Truth

    Hello, cavalin! The rhythm of this is great, everything flows really nicely so I can imagine some lyrics being put with this too. I like the chorus part, and the ...

    Mar 7, 2015

  • Lyrics » General, General
    Re: How much ilove you

    Hi DIAMOND! I like the idea behind these lyrics. At a first look, it seems that it's going to something quite specific, which I like. I do have a few ...

    Mar 7, 2015

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General
    Re: Tiny Pieces

    Hello, SharraeWilson! I can definitely imagine these lyrics put along with some kind of tune, the rhythm is definitely there. I liked hook/chorus part which was repeated, and I also ...

    Mar 7, 2015

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic
    Re: The End Of The Beginning

    Hello, SoundsofLife! I liked these lyrics because they were filled with so much emotion and I think that that's what really made it different. I'm used to reading quite generic ...

    Mar 7, 2015


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