Arathorth

Hey! I'm here to review, so here goes: I love this poem. I can guess that you intended to transport readers to a new place and I can safely say ...

Hey! So I love a good rhyming pattern but this one takes the proverbial biscuit. I love the basic ABAB CDCD but then the internal rhymes too!? Ugh, it was ...

Hey! I really like this poem - it's a lot shorter than most poems I know but honestly that really doesn't matter - it is short and sweet and being ...

Hey! So this is cool, and by cool I mean poetry in the weirdest and purest form. The thing I love about it is the length. You have demonstrated that ...

Hey, I love this - it flows really nicely and although simple is quite powerful, well done :) On to criticism, of which there is not much: Firstly, your fourth ...

Hey! This poem is exceptional. I love it, it's beautifully written and the imagery is so deep. You write with so much emotion, and I love the long line structure. ...

Hey! I love this poem, the imagery and subject matter are so ambiguous and intriguing that it really pulls you in. Your descriptions are effortless and build up a detailed ...

Hey! Great work here, I really enjoyed reading this. You manage to put so much emotion and meaning into quite a simple structure, and it is really powerful to read. ...

Hey! I love this poem. It's very emotional and it's written in a way that makes it feel personal - it affects the reader. This is a sign of a ...

Wow. That was incredible. You truly have a gift here. This poem is ambiguous, but so mellifluous and gorgeous in description that it holds so much weight. I want to ...

Hey! This is such a beautiful description, I love the deep meaning behind every stanza. You truly have a gift for painting a scene with words, and your imagery is ...

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Hey! This poem is so intriguing and beautiful that I had to read it several times to take it all in! I love the ambiguity of the subject matter, and ...

Hey! This is such a great story. It's so short but conveys so much emotion and feeling that it stays with you, which is the dream of any screenwriter. You're ...

Jeez, I love this poem. The most striking thing is the constant rhythm established. It's effortlessly built up by the short lines and enjambement and then beautifully deconstructed by the ...