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Re: vulnerability
Waddup Desdemona! It's been a hot second since I've last done a review and been on this site, however, I am oh so glad that I started here. This was ...
Apr 22, 2019 -
Re: Green.
Wassup! First of all, welcome to this site! It's always super exciting when new people come because there's just that much more creativity, you know? Anyways, I'm glad you're here ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: this is a world
qalbdaye3, Wow. Wow. Wow. You, my friend, have made something. Something so true and real, and yet in the simplest way. I'll be honest, looking at the length and the ...
May 21, 2018 -
Re: Finding Destiny (Chapter 11)
Hey hey! So, it's been a really long time since I've read the past chapters in this book and I just would like to say wow! I remember last chapter ...
Dec 31, 2015 -
Re: If I Were Juliet
Hey hey! I'm here for a review! I've gotta be honest it's been a while since I've done one of these, but hey it's better than nothing :). First, I ...
Dec 31, 2015 -
Re: This Girl
Hey hey! I'm here for a review! So the last time I've actually made a review as in the summer so I am a bit rusty, but I think that ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: Rich
Hey hey! So first off, wow! And second of all, great poem! I really loved the concept of this poem and I loved the idea and detailing that went into ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: My Soul as Tinder
Hey hey! So, first off this poem is so extremely amazing that I cannot dines words to describe it. Web I review I for look for mistakes, but oftentimes I ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: The Tree
Hey hey! First things first, I see that this is your first piece on YWS , so congrats on that! I really hope that I can help you in anyway ...
Aug 29, 2015 -
Re: Permanent Sleep
Hey hey! First off, I'm so happy to see that you are well enough to start doing more activity on this sight. I loved everything about this poem. Everything from ...
Aug 18, 2015 -
Re: From, The Soldier
Hey hey! Wow! This piece of writing is absolutely amazing. I really enjoy reading poetry like this. It's more than just a poem with a message, it's a poem with ...
Aug 14, 2015 -
Re: If Emotion
Hey hey! I haven't reviewed anything in awhile, but to get back into the swing of things I am so happy that this can be my first piece to review ...
Aug 11, 2015 -
Re: i wrote this in the middle of the night
Hey hey! So, I must first say that I absolutely love this poem and can relate to absolutely everything that was said. I have written poems in the middle of ...
Aug 4, 2015 -
Re: Muscle Memory
Hey hey! Okay, so I have reviewed your poem "Watch Me", and I remember that I loved it. So, it;s no surprised that when I read this I was just ...
Aug 1, 2015 -
Re: Ocean
Hey hey! Okay, so first let me say welcome to YWS! I love reading the works from new members! Not only do I get a feel for what their style ...
Aug 1, 2015
