AlmondEyes

Howdy there!! If you need someone to bounce names off of I am more than happy to help! I find that something as simple as choosing names for character in ...

Howdy!! I would like to say that this story has started off rather interestingly. Something I would recommend doing is to breaking your story up in a way that makes ...

Hello There!! AlmondEyes here to do a quick review!! Anyways (ahem xD), Let me begin by saying I do not agree with manilla. I liked this poem. You were very ...

Hello there! Here to do a review (Obviously xD) Anyways (Ahem xD), I agree with the comments from Icy. It is a lot of information to take in, and it ...

I Love this! This is something people should talk about more in my opinion. Some of the most toxic people I've ever been around are people claim to be. They ...

Hi there! I just finished reading your poem, and I must say bravo!! I should let you know I like to recap what I read and what I think as ...

Hi there!! Me again ^^!! Let's get right into it; Your silence condems as much as their words. I liked this sentence, because it's true. People turn a blind eye ...

Hi! Here to do a review! Or try xD: Ok. Let's start with an over view of the entire poem. I thought you did a great job on the poem. ...

Your poem was done really well, though you should work on your punctuation. It can go a long way in making your poem sound even better than it does. We ...

Hi there! Just so you know, i'm not very good at these. I'm here to review, so let's get down to it: I really liked this poem. I really liked ...

Ok, so let's get into it: You kissed the [bold]doorframe[/bold], staring out into the swirling snow with your slate eyes. That's the only thing I wanted to pick at because ...

It seems to me, that you've lost your way. Step into my lair, and I'll let you stay. Not for long, just so you can rest, and go back out ...

Let's get down to it: Pristine bubbles pop into Prismatic spray, coating my Vision in ripe pink and Succulent purple. I'm not much of a fan of Pink as I ...

I liked this poem. My favorite part was when I got to the middle and you began to rhyme. Shadows never stretch or loom, or whisper softly certain doom. Shadows ...

I've never been good a t reviewing anything, but here goes: There was once a girl, with a foot in both worlds. When I read this, I though it was ...