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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dream Diary

    Fizzy! Let me give you a lovely review for your very lovely piece, Dream Diary! Oooh, it seems so dreamy now that I've read it. Frantic night times This is ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Vibrant Longing

    Rosan! What a very vibrant piece! May I give it a review, please? :D May I give a chop-up review for it? Have you heard the voices in the wind? ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: The Voice for the Voiceless

    Ariana! Well, as requested! But next time, please do try the WRFF forum to request a review instead, okay! Well, here I am for one big review! Okay, so first, ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Mummy

    Nargie Nargles! I need to review this poem because of the awesome title! Well, I first thought it's about a real mummy, as in a creepy, eat organs and all ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Trains

    Heya Birkoff! Alf here for a review! Time to attack your poem with words of criticizing! Sorry, I'm out of power shouts. Trains I always loved trains, I met you ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Life.

    Los! Oooh, such a pretty poem! Lemme give you a chopped-up review for this little beauty! Looking to the stars, I begin to cry; I think it's too dry. The ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 4)

    Heya! Reviewer here for, well, a review! Lemme give you a Chop-Up review! Aria lay face up screeching at the top of her lungs. When you say screech, it's like ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: The Butterfly

    Hey! What a lovely piece this is! And thus, I shall give a review for it! SHAZAM! First, I would like to commend the very beautiful use of the object, ...

    Apr 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: If I could Remember

    Hey, hey, hey! Ariana! 'tis my time to give a review for your lovely work, If I Could Remember! Good thing I remembered this! When my mother held me tight ...

    Apr 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: Death Becomes Her

    Illusion! Let me give you a quick review for your piece! Okay, so first, I'd like to commend your wonderful use of poetry to narrate a transformation. This is the ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: That Boy: Part 4

    MY REVIEW GOT DELETED. I dunno why! I AM SO SORRY! I mean, I had explanation for each of the technicalities I found below. Long explanations. It's a five hundred ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Out Here

    I dunno what to say! Should this be a review? Well a short one at least! Haikus, well, I'm a lover of the kind of poem! Many people deem it ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Don't Worry

    Hey Demtry! Here am I for a short review on this lovely piece of yars! Hooray for today! First, I would like to commend on the fascinating element of mystery ...

    Mar 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Trees

    Hey Dream! A short review for this beautiful prose poetry! First, I'd like to comment that this is a very beautiful piece. It places itself between the anxiety and curiosity ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: You Only Love Once

    Hey Aliyah! What a short piece! However, I'll try to give in my review. Firstly, I really like the concept of the piece. It's very straightforward. There are no twists ...

    Feb 24, 2013


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