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  • Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Re: my past is a museum

    Yo you writer person. Let's dissect your piece and make rainbows with its bloody dismembered bits (okay bad imagery but das da point, man). MATTER Obviously, this is a retrospective ...

    Apr 1, 2015

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy
    Re: Someday Fly

    Yo person! Okay, prose-poem here. Let me give it a good look. So first, there are a number of grammar concerns you need to have a check-see. I tried reading ...

    Apr 1, 2015

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: you...

    Hey Panda! Can I give you some quick point-outs for this review! Thanks! Punctuation Although it's not needed, punctuation can be a great plus for the flow of the piece. ...

    May 25, 2013

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: He was the Past, You're my Future

    Wow! What a very cute title for a very cute poem Belle! And I think I shall end it with that! No, I'm only kidding! Let me give you my ...

    May 25, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Eden

    Oh my gosh, this is, like, a sad poem :( You told me so! Anyways, let me give you a sweet review for this sad work! Well, in a way, ...

    May 25, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Blinded Love

    Saria! Oooh! A sonnet! A very lovely sonnet! I rarely find traditionally metered poems like this in YWS anymore! When I've read the description, I was sure to myself that ...

    May 21, 2013

  • Other » Realistic, General
    Re: Going Beethoven

    Schubert! I love your username! Anyways, let me give a grammar, presentation and style review for this shot article! Going Beethoven No need to mention the title again, because it's ...

    May 2, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Abrupt Memories

    Iron! Hey, it's my time to give you an awesome review! Well, it's not actually awesome, but I'll try my best. The night is quiet and still. The stars are ...

    May 1, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Birdcage

    Heya Fizzy! Lemme do a chop-up for your piece, Birdcgae! I sat still like a statue, and blinked in agreement. I really like these verses. They really say that you're ...

    Apr 28, 2013

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Consequence

    Hey Rosan! Me again! Why is it like that? I always fall into one or two of your works...anyways, here's my review. First, I would like to commend on your ...

    Apr 28, 2013

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Tinkering for Love

    Heya! Alf here for a review! May you see this as a way to improve, young lady! Okay, so first and foremost, I'd like to salute you for your rhymes ...

    Apr 28, 2013

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Independence

    Hey Kattie! Here for a chop-up review for your piece! And I would say you were soulless, If I thought it were true. I really like the first few verses. ...

    Apr 28, 2013

  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Re: Some Truth To Life

    Nike! Do you know that the word Nike is taken from the Greek goddess of victory? Anyways, what a very short story! Let me give it a chop-up so that ...

    Apr 28, 2013

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: The Flaming Tower of Apathy

    Heya Madame! Time for me to give you a review! Well, first, let me say that I love this piece. Out of the pieces I've read today, this is the ...

    Apr 28, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: To My Mother

    Monsieur Penguin! Bon jour! I never knew There's a male penguin on the loose here at YWS! Well, anyways, it's time for me to give a review, so here am ...

    Apr 28, 2013


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