Aley

Well since this is a flash-poem I'm not sure if you want it to actually get a review or if you just want feedback on your poetry style in general ...

Mm, I can see this is a really emotional poem for you, and it's probably hard to take feedback on this, so I'll keep it soft. My suggestion to you ...

Hey Rohan, Aley here to review from team Blueberry Muffins! This is really lyrical and pretty. I love how the rhyme scheme is gentle and it's hardly noticeable. Your abba ...

Hey, Aley here to review you for Team Blueberry Muffins! So, first poem? Or first love poem? I like the sections where you're being specific about the person you wrote ...

Hey! Aley here to review you for Team BlueBerry Muffins this fine review day. First off, I have to say that I love the way that this poem feels very ...

Hey Eros, Overall, I think this poem has a good speaker for a dramatic poem. I love the way that you're using rhyme here since it definitely emphasises some of ...

Hey Rosey, I think I recognize this series from talking with you and that makes me super excited XD Overall, I only found one thing I think needs changing. "Even ...

Hey NafaKitty, Aley here for a Review Day Review! Now, I spent a lot of time on this mostly because of grammar, and I wrote it while I was reading, ...

Hey EKK15, Good work here. I feel like the pieces are very narrative and they evoke a lot of senses, mostly smell and sight, but that's a really good place ...

Hey Radrook I absolutely love the villanelle structure. This is one of the ones that I love to play with and break the rules or follow them as it suits ...

Hey Radrook, a bit of returning the favor here, you just reviewed one of my poems today so I'm here to do so as well! Last time I saw you ...

Hey, yeah, okay, I shoulda guessed it was you XD Hi Radrook. I can't remember if I've actually gotten around to reviewing your poetry before or if I always just ...

Hey AnneTaylor's sister! I think you have the poem pretty spot on when it comes to a discussion with someone. There is this thing in poetry that asks whether poems ...

Ohhhh my, she's going to be a governess isn't she? That's probably the Empress' daughter and "we" have to tend to her and she's going to be a little brat ...

Hey Querencia, Happy AfterWatch! Overall I think your story is good. It sounds very interesting and I like the tension you have, and how he knows it's going to sound ...