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Re: My Last Goodbye
Hey there! Akelia here for a review! So I would just like to start of saying, I LOVE THIS POEM. I loved the Disney references, and how they really went ...
Jun 12, 2017 -
Re: As Things Became Real
Heyo! Akelia here for a review! So before we begin, I would just like to say that I love the overall feel of this poem. To me it's kind of ...
Jun 6, 2017 -
Re: Que Sera Sera Chapter 7
Hey there! Akelia here for a review! So although I have not read any of the previous chapters, this chapter makes me want to read more. So as I review, ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Wild Child's Giddy Eye
Hey again! Akelia here again for another review! So for this poem I found it a bit...confusing to be honest. I'll explain in a second why. So again, I will ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Chapter II: Destruction, Devastation and remembrance.
Hey there! Akelia here for a review! I'm a huge fan of fantasy and medieval writings, so this appealed to me greatly. I enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: colourless world and a colourful boy
Hey there! Akelia here for a review! Wow...just....wow. This poem. *stares into space* *slaps self back the computer* Anyways! I loved this poem so much. It was dark at first, ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: downing chugs with the devil
Hi again! He, I keep finding myself coming to your poems! I love them! So, another review, yet again, another series of sweets and sours. Let's get started. This poem ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Bâfrer The Pup
Hello, hello! Akelia here for a review! So to start off, I naturally like poetry, and this is no exception. A bit different then my own way or any other ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: S.P.I. Chapter 2
Hey there! Akelia here for a review! So first off, I just have to say, I love spy stories. So this attracted my eye. Usually I tend to go for ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Nature
Hey! It's Akelia, here for a review. I would have to say this is by far one of the greatest poems I've read in my time on YWS. It's beautiful, ...
Mar 19, 2017 -
Re: waiting for the moon to say goodnight
Hey there! Akelia here for a review! I just wanted to say, this is beautiful. We get the message of the poem, although it is really short, it tells me ...
Mar 19, 2017 -
Re: The Ticket to Trust CH.1- Handcuffed
NICEEEEE JOOBBBB!!!! Ok, I've already read this before, but I still love it! My favorite line is... You missin somethin?” The stranger plopped Drew’s hat down on his head. “Fergot ...
Dec 13, 2016 -
Re: The Grand Meaning of Events
Wow. Just....wow. That was deep. Anyway, I just wanted to get that across. Hey, I'm Akelia. Time for a review! I thought this was rather cool, I liked the way ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Flowers lead to sadness
They bring sadness of death. Yes, absolutely. People overestimate them. Anyway, great job! I really liked this. Gives me a lot of feels. I did catch a couple of rhymes, ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Drowning
Hey there! Akelia Taske here for a review! First off, I want to say that this is an AMAZING poem! You did a very good job with writing it, and ...
Aug 20, 2016