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Abysalyounglord

  • Poetry » General, General Re: It was never truth that hurt

    "This poem portrays the emotional pain and betrayal caused by lies and deception. The speaker expresses their frustration and hurt at being denied the truth and the right to know. ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Summer Vacation

    "This poem captures a strong and vivid sensory experience of a summer day by the lake with family. The descriptions of the warm wind, crashing water, sand slipping between the ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: after years in the desert

    "This poem creates a powerful sense of nostalgia and connection to nature, evoking vivid imagery of waterfalls, lakes, and running streams, as well as the changing of seasons and the ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: "are we friends?" ... "no."

    "The poem evokes a strong sense of heartbreak and betrayal, as the speaker grapples with their feelings for someone who has hurt them deeply. The language is raw and visceral, ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: you're beautiful when you're genuine

    "This poem delivers a powerful message about the importance of being true to oneself, and the negative impact that pretending and wearing a false persona can have on relationships and ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, Fantasy Re: Plastic

    "This poem leaves a powerful impression of tragedy and regret. The speaker paints a vivid picture of a person drowning in a once-beautiful place, now polluted by the very creations ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: of jasper eyes and clandestine meetings-

    "This poem leaves a haunting impression with its vivid imagery and dark themes of betrayal, loss, and the all-consuming desire for love. The contrast between the grim setting of the ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: singular

    "This is a poignant and thought-provoking poem that explores the theme of memory and loss. The use of vivid and emotional language effectively conveys the sense of longing and heartache ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: Sin.

    "This is a short but powerful poem that explores the theme of trust and love, drawing inspiration from the biblical story of Adam and Eve. The poem is written in ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: She had to watch her lover burn

    "This is a poignant and heartbreaking poem that explores the pain and anguish of losing a loved one. The use of vivid imagery and emotional language effectively conveys the sense ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Burning Candles

    This poem has a beautiful and mesmerizing imagery that comes to life when read. The imagery of flickering candles in the wind, melting into nothing, and lighting up a rosy ...

    Feb 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: What Love Can Do

    I really enjoyed your poem about love. It has a very poetic and emotional quality that I think many people can relate to. It speaks of the complexity of love, ...

    Feb 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Believing in wisdom

    I liked the poem because it conveys a strong sense of community and appreciation for wisdom and beliefs. The poem speaks of the people looking up to their elders and ...

    Feb 16, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: A King; A Poet

    This poem was an interesting and thought-provoking exploration of the sometimes overwhelming and conflicting feelings of responsibility and autonomy. The words chosen to portray the speaker’s emotio

    Feb 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Call Of The Rebellion

    I really enjoy this poem! It has a powerful message of protection and strength. I like the imagery of dragons and fangs, talons, and horns coming to the aid of ...

    Feb 16, 2023


How can I be king of the world? Because I am king of rubbish. And rubbish is what the world is made of.
— Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane