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Re: chrysanthemum
I understand this to be about the idea of kinda introspectively exploring the ideas of love and the feelings of self doubt and impermanence. There's a real air of fragility ...
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Re: cepheus
I adored this poem! It was equally dark and kind of sweet to begin with, and ended on a really strong note. I have a few suggestions but of course ...
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Re: Arrival (Chapter 4-ish) *Rough Draft
I've not read anything of yours before and this is obviously a few chapters into the story, but I have to say you immediately had me hooked with the opening ...
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Re: Morrigan realizes the truth
Another enjoyable short story from you! Overall, it was intriguing, as always a little more description would benefit the piece but I enjoyed learning more about their stories. Morrigan tried ...
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Re: Christmas kisses and wishes
Okay so I am finally back to Aleron and Lunria's stories! [quote They had been dating for a while, they met last Christmas at a hot chocolate cafe. [/quote] Is ...
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Re: Look Past The Surface
But what if I told you it’s not your reflection staring back—it’s the version of yourself you wish existed? The one who stands taller, whose eyes hold a spark of ...
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Re: Tomato King, Potato Queen Prologue : Mannapped (yeah that's right I'm not a CHILD) By Vegetable People
I have to admit this short story had me giggling. Will you write more about Tubby? I need to know what happens next. Who is the enemy kingdom? Is it ...
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Re: Andrea’s poem
hello... me again.... are you sick of my reviews yet (jk,, hopefully XD) I adored this one. It was such a sweet premise, and I also related a lot because ...
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Re: ohodlchid aemgs
are you secretly a professor of poetry or a published poet masquerading as a yws user..... this is possibly one of my favourite poems I have read on this site... ...
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Re: Caspar and Beverly’s wedding
oo yes another really short piece! I love these
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Re: Healing
Okay, hello, I am back again reviewing ANOTHER of your fantastic stories. You must write a lot! How do you come up with your ideas? They are all super unique ...
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Re: speaking of ink
Your poem is expertly understands and displays the tension that exists for yourself, and other writers, between exhaustion and creative perseverance. Ink is not just a medium you use to ...
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Re: 31 Hazardous Halloween Tales (part four) (18-31)
I seem to be reviewing so many of your stories lately! I hope you don't mind, I've enjoyed reading them all and I thought I'd do this one as it's ...
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Re: A change of heart
Firstly, I love the name Inclementia. In fact, I love how unique ALL your characters' names are! How do you come up with them? This was a really sweet, short ...
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Re: A car pulls up
At first I thought maybe you had accidentally deleted the rest of the story, but then upon reading the review below I realised it was supposed to be this short. ...
Feb 22, 2025
