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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Hurt To Love You (revised)

    Hi Rinta! How are you? I'm Kat, and I shall review now ^.^ So, first I'd like to warn you about a thing I'm sure you have already heard: this ...

    Jan 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Heart of a poet

    Hello Melvin! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? ^.^ So, I really liked this. You made a poem about a poet that sounded like written by a poet and ...

    Jan 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Can't They Tell?

    Hi lyndzie! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? ;) So, the biggest issue with this is what has been mentioned above: it's too common. When you pick up a ...

    Jan 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Your Most Faithful Friend

    Hi singing Saturdays! I'm here to review again --> I've reviewed one of your poem today, too. So, I'll just point out a few thins, and then the overall. rid ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The pen's work

    Hi girl! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? ^.^ As everyone has mentioned above, development on this would do wonders. Sometimes, it's good to add some more to the ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Life is Like Sand

    Hi anime girl! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing ;) So, I agree with the person above me, about the connection part. I'd like to say development better. My advice ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Pile of Bones

    Hi Kat! I'm Kat xD No, seriously xD Nice meeting you! I'll be reviewing, okay? So, I really liked this. I think it's because of it's light touch of something ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: confusion

    Hi Sans! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing this, okay? So, first, the thing that most bothered me at the beginning were all the periods. The first two are well ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Grandma [Edit]

    Hi Lydia! I'm Kat and I'll review your poem, okay? So, first, a few nit-picks: Your by the sea. 'Your' is a possessive thing. You mean 'you're', which is the ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A new year wish

    Hi July! I'm Kat. And I'd like to congratulate you, because you are now my 300th review. So, party! I've come to figure I actually like other poetry for the ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Sound of the Wind

    Oh my God, you're eight?! WOW. I'm Kat, by the way! Nice meeting you. So, I really liked this. Very simple, and for an eight year old, amazing. It has ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Memories of Autumn

    Hi Kyo! I said I was soo gonna review, so I'm here to review! So, I really liked this. But, there are some parts where I think it sounds a ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lose Yourself

    Hi singing saturdays! Nice user name ;) I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? I really like what you've got going on here. I think it's a very good theme ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: day to day

    Hi death2.. hum preps. I'm Kat! Nice meeting ya. I'll be reviewing ;) So, first a few nit-picks. There were very few of them, but I was disappointed when I ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Autumn

    Hi Fantasy! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? So, it's a vilanelle! I once struggled with it, and believe me, my result was waaay worse than yours xD I ...

    Jan 13, 2010


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