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Re: I Hurt To Love You (revised)
Hi Rinta! How are you? I'm Kat, and I shall review now ^.^ So, first I'd like to warn you about a thing I'm sure you have already heard: this ...
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Re: Heart of a poet
Hello Melvin! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? ^.^ So, I really liked this. You made a poem about a poet that sounded like written by a poet and ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Can't They Tell?
Hi lyndzie! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? ;) So, the biggest issue with this is what has been mentioned above: it's too common. When you pick up a ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Your Most Faithful Friend
Hi singing Saturdays! I'm here to review again --> I've reviewed one of your poem today, too. So, I'll just point out a few thins, and then the overall. rid ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: The pen's work
Hi girl! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? ^.^ As everyone has mentioned above, development on this would do wonders. Sometimes, it's good to add some more to the ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Life is Like Sand
Hi anime girl! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing ;) So, I agree with the person above me, about the connection part. I'd like to say development better. My advice ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Pile of Bones
Hi Kat! I'm Kat xD No, seriously xD Nice meeting you! I'll be reviewing, okay? So, I really liked this. I think it's because of it's light touch of something ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: confusion
Hi Sans! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing this, okay? So, first, the thing that most bothered me at the beginning were all the periods. The first two are well ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Grandma [Edit]
Hi Lydia! I'm Kat and I'll review your poem, okay? So, first, a few nit-picks: Your by the sea. 'Your' is a possessive thing. You mean 'you're', which is the ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: A new year wish
Hi July! I'm Kat. And I'd like to congratulate you, because you are now my 300th review. So, party! I've come to figure I actually like other poetry for the ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: A Sound of the Wind
Oh my God, you're eight?! WOW. I'm Kat, by the way! Nice meeting you. So, I really liked this. Very simple, and for an eight year old, amazing. It has ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Memories of Autumn
Hi Kyo! I said I was soo gonna review, so I'm here to review! So, I really liked this. But, there are some parts where I think it sounds a ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Lose Yourself
Hi singing saturdays! Nice user name ;) I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? I really like what you've got going on here. I think it's a very good theme ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: day to day
Hi death2.. hum preps. I'm Kat! Nice meeting ya. I'll be reviewing ;) So, first a few nit-picks. There were very few of them, but I was disappointed when I ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Autumn
Hi Fantasy! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? So, it's a vilanelle! I once struggled with it, and believe me, my result was waaay worse than yours xD I ...
Jan 13, 2010
