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EVery damn detailed have been pointed out! LOL Hey I'm Kat! I was going to review, but someone :roll: stole my words away... I liked this. the beggining reminded me ...

Hey there Sincerly_I_Write! Welcome to YWS! First of all, LISBON ROCKS! *laughs* just had to cheer for my country's capital. So, on to your poem. this is really nice. just ...

Hey there LlamaDuck! What's up? I liked this, to be honest. But there are some things that are in need of polishing up. They see blood upon my hands And ...

Hey there Korseld! Welcome to YWS! You'll have great joy here (if you don't suck :P) Anyway, I'm Kat and I'm going to review your piece :D Your theme is ...

Oh.... so sweeeeeeeeeeet! *smiles* Hi, I'm Kat and I don't have much to say on this one. I adored it! The rhyming was good, and i did not found any ...

Hey there Nalyd! Welcome to YWS! You'll have great joy here. So, about your poem. My first impression is that maybe you should change it to Lyric poetry. If you ...

Hey there, Zyth! Welcome aboard to YWS! You'll have much joy here. I'll try to do the most detailed review I can with this poem. I like it. Except on ...

Hey there Angel! Mind if i call you that? So, I absolutely loved this! this is the beautiful! And amazingly done! I would nto even change a word. My favorite ...

OMG! Certainly not a filler! Meep, you keep surprising me! As for mistakes I only found those above mentioned. I am extremely impressed with your capability of expression and "display" ...

OMG! Please continue this! I absolutely love it. it's completely hilarious. I'm a Stephenie Meyer fan. I've read all the books and I've seen the movie, but this is just ...

Hey there GAM! Welcome to YWS! You'll have great joy here. About your poem, the first thing I thought was that this should not be in Narrative, I think maybe ...

Hey there Meep! Sorry for the delay on this one :D ohhh Shauni got here first! I'll get to her later :twisted: May I answer to Shauni first question? I ...

Hey there... I was happily singing along a happy song when this stumbled in my way. I thought it was interesting and read it. Big mistake. I'm sad!!!!!!! This is ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! You'll have much joy here. If you have any question about anything just PM me. So, on to your review! I like this. I particulary ...

Hey there! Welcome aboard to YWS! You'll have much joy here! So, on to your review! I absolutely loved it! I could not find anything wrong! You should take the ...