My favoyrite part was, (quoted bellow)
Days and Nights, I searched in vain.
Every step I took, taken in pain.
Yet I feel that all this pain will yield no gain,
My tears keep flowing like heavy rain.
My outward joy, I can no longer maintain,
Will I ever find my Love?
I enjoyed reading this poem, while reading it i felt is if you were sharing a special story with me,
it was deep and full of true emotions.
I dont have much to say mor that this is some great lyrics.
I encourage you to continue writing and i hope you continue to mantain your standards, with your grammar, and spelling. you can also add some similies, metaphor, and a bit of irony to make your poems a bit more intersting.
other than that a job well done keep up the good work.
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Reviews: 17
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