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This really impressed me, Brad. Very good job; the imagery captured my attention well.

Mmm... the unicorn line in the second stanza seems a little on the cheesy/cliche end, though...

But I did really enjoy reading this.
Wow...I want to thank so many people for being here...well of course, God...and um...Nate...let's see...Liz...Brad...Chevy...Satan.


They're all cool.




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stunning, brad. absolutely stunning.




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Yeah. It's for our very own faith (i.e. Whitney)! Heee.

Anyway, the Unicorn bit was in reference to one of her previous poems where she said that if you still see unicorns then you are still innocent.
"If I have not seen as far as others, it is because giants were standing on my shoulders." -Hal Abelson




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*frolics with brad* I really do like this you know..




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Aww that's really sweet. :)
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