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Note: This was written by me and Sam; so beware. my thoughts spill on the paper like the words from…Sun Mar 06, 2005 7:51 pm -
The water ripples in webs of beauty Intricate, weaving through the glassy surface The storm clouds …Sun Mar 06, 2005 4:34 pm -
I'd rather grind glass into my eyes. The pain is laughable When I compare it to what I see When you…Sun Mar 06, 2005 2:19 am -
The days grow short, The moments end, Good friends still lie, Nice boys pretend, To be so sweet, To…Fri Mar 04, 2005 11:15 pm -
OK...this poem I'm posting as two parts since they're both very confuzzling and would sound weird t…Fri Mar 04, 2005 10:35 pm -
All right, driving along, not a happy sky, rahter blah day...and this song "How Do You Get So Lonel…Fri Mar 04, 2005 8:36 pm -
this is a poem I attempted to write, anyway. there is a message I want to get across but I just don…Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:36 pm -
This is a really stupid poem I just wrote about me...and my uncle. It's true. And I know it's stupi…Fri Mar 04, 2005 9:45 am -
She was beat 11 times, By her father-she thinks She was afraid, Oh yes she was, She could not even …Wed Mar 02, 2005 4:15 pm -
how much courage does it take to surrender to gravity? for a moment, at least, you are above it all…Wed Mar 02, 2005 1:50 am -
A million times better really it is :)! This begining is wonderful really captured me this time. Mu…Wed Mar 02, 2005 1:17 am -
I need hard, honest critisism,pleeeeeeeez. I believe everyone Can have an opinion on the matter. I …Wed Mar 02, 2005 1:16 am -
So we took a bus instead and the passengers in all their grungy filth watched, disinterested, as we…Tue Mar 01, 2005 7:04 am -
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~A DARK PAST~ Wounds now may heal Bruises won't last But something darker than blood Still haunts t…Mon Feb 28, 2005 9:02 pm -
Ok...i was writing this and couldn't write anymore so i stopped. a better ending is in order. :D yo…Mon Feb 28, 2005 8:38 pm -
mmm...if this poem doesn't make sense, read Revelation by faith.Mon Feb 28, 2005 7:07 pm -
this is me in a drunken stupor. i suggest you take the time out, now, to rip something of mine to s…Sun Feb 27, 2005 12:10 pm -
OK...this poem is another reason why I hope no one from school ever finds this web page. This is ab…Sun Feb 27, 2005 10:06 am -
I ain't never seen a poor white guy in the world Maybe 'cause all the white folks are workin' and a…Sun Feb 27, 2005 5:24 am -
[pre]Dark and mysterious stranger, Walk my way, Tell me something, But tell me nothing, To give you…Sat Feb 26, 2005 11:34 pm -
Please do not read my poetry if you do not plan on commenting. This annoys me to no end.Sat Feb 26, 2005 5:38 pm -
Your poem is quite strange in its writing, but unique in its point. "Does the satin on your bed rem…Sat Feb 26, 2005 11:31 am -
I'm not sure on this at all but hey, I'm not sure if this is the right section for it either. Pleas…Sat Feb 26, 2005 11:09 am -
the soft sound of a computer dying made me think of you. the defiant swirl of a cable reminiscent o…Fri Feb 25, 2005 11:33 pm -
Lol, the ending kinda caught me off gaurd there. All of a sudden, you're talking about your hair, l…Thu Feb 24, 2005 6:27 pm -
All right, I've been majorly depressed the last couple of days. I keep having this recurring dream …Thu Feb 24, 2005 2:10 am -
Brilliant rhyming. I haven't seen such a flowing and easy to read rhyme scheme for an age until I r…Mon Feb 21, 2005 10:50 pm -
i used to try and work out when you closed your eyes your brown, beautiful eyes whether it was ecst…Sun Feb 20, 2005 11:21 pm -
OK this originally started out with the idea for the first line...then i just had fun with it and k…Sun Feb 20, 2005 10:33 pm -
niceSun Feb 20, 2005 9:33 pm -
wow...so is this what happens when you write a poem a day?,lol perhaps i should start doing this...…Sat Feb 19, 2005 2:35 pm -
teenie boppers emo singing guitar stringing kids. Haha. Love that line. Well, you told me not to re…Sat Feb 19, 2005 4:35 am -
Gah, small font. Anyway.. That's a nice poem. I like it. There's one line.. "wishing we were someon…Sat Feb 19, 2005 3:45 am -
My first posting! YAY! Every story has an introduction so i figure i need one too. here i go! Let '…Fri Feb 18, 2005 12:11 am -
staring at the sun you wonder whether the pandemonium of colours spiralling ahead of your eyes is y…Thu Feb 17, 2005 11:47 pm -
Overall, I liked it. it was a good poem. nice job. And you cut yourself to feel alive. Wow. Very st…Wed Feb 16, 2005 10:48 pm -
The shadow of a shadow, leans against my feet. A symphony of darkness, plays its note within my hea…Tue Feb 15, 2005 4:01 pm -
There's no place to start, Excepting the ending maybe, Where you're sure to feel the impact. There'…Tue Feb 15, 2005 3:47 pm -
WHY DO YOU WANT TO QUIT? this was perhaps the best poem you've written, except for the last one you…Tue Feb 15, 2005 2:28 pm -
This poem is in no traditional style, and is not supposed to flow a certain way. The important thin…Thu Feb 10, 2005 3:43 am -
The jab cross to your nose makes something give way it bleeds a lot Your nose Your face is smeared …Wed Feb 09, 2005 4:32 am -
this blood wants to be free instead of ever-sluicing in my veins. it hates the dullness, the monoto…Sun Feb 06, 2005 8:11 pm -
Many tears make the pool The pool of insanity Which holds the empty and the soulless in its grip It…Sun Feb 06, 2005 1:54 pm -
The last few days have been a blur Of wine-soaked dreams, Of touches in the haze of drunkenness, A …Sat Feb 05, 2005 2:34 am -
Just a little something that I wrote in German class when we were doing poetry. The translation is …Fri Feb 04, 2005 6:49 pm -
One little note, the word drowned is meant to be read as it would have been in Shakespeare's day (d…Fri Feb 04, 2005 1:30 pm -
This was really good guys! I wish I had something to say...but I don't. *sigh*Fri Feb 04, 2005 1:25 pm -
she wears her blood like peach juice on her white sleeve, like the soft sponge of baby skin, crease…Thu Feb 03, 2005 4:32 pm -
Sometimes I hate These feelings inside It feels like Something is burning Coming from Nowhere I kno…Wed Feb 02, 2005 3:44 am
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