Wow... I have seen so many poems about suicide.
Sometimes the topic does get a little dried up.
I do like the poem, like most of your other works, Brad. But sometimes you've read so much about a subject you don't even stop to think about it ... you know?
Although, most people try to rhyme with a poem like this (and fail). So I like how you avoided this altogether, and tried to force a sense of guilt onto the reader, like it was their fault she killed herself.
Good job.
