You're right. Angsty poetry does get annoying after the zillionth suicide poem.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
I feel so...defined. And like I should shoot myself because my life is shit. Good job! Only thing I got to say is, instead of bolding that last line, put it by itself. I think it will give it more oomph.
I liked the bold at the end I liked the angstiness (if that's even a word)...I liked everything. I don't think I've ever been able to relate to something that you wrote so well. I wrote an entry in my diary like this. It was very poetic--I might post it here someday. Anyway, Brad...it was great and I loved it from beginning to end.
Yeah I really liked the poem. Incandescence you are an amazing poet
~*~Peace, Love, and Protesters~*~
I'm not off beat!I'm marching to the beat of my own drum
I rock my socks
Hippielicious the bold new flavor from caroline
JFK BLOWN AWAY WHAT ELSE DO I HAVE TO SAY!!!!!!!
Okay... I reread this thing like a dozen times trying to find SOMETHING I didn't like about this. But I couldn't. This is so true and so awesome. You really did a fantastic job.
The robbed that smiles, steals something from the thief. ~William Shakespeare, Othello Boo. SPEW is watching.
