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The boy was only 13 years old, but had made the torturous journey up the mountain. He stood on a sharp cliff at the very top of the icy mountain. ...

The grass spread from under the horses' hooves as they thundered across the emerald meadow, their muscles rippling with each stride. their riders were sumptuously dressed; the majority of them ...

The tracks were clear, for any type of dwarf, even a Dugon, leave large deep tracks. Something was gnawing at the back of Philip’s mind, but as usual, after a ...

Normally I wouldn't post another chapter so soon after the other, but certain restrictions to my free time have sprung up, and as a result I don't know when I'll ...

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Talya I knew that they had gone after Cali, not me. I breathed a sigh of relief, but I had to keep going, for our brothers sake, I had to ...

A few edits from before. If you want to tell me to change something eg. description, please give a specific example. No offense to my other reviewers but "Description could ...

[i]this one is okay... It needs some work. please critique!!!* The moon glowed crimson in the ominous sky. Sirion looked up at it briefly as he stepped out of the ...

Rated "R" for violence. It's not really *that* violent -- buut -- I suppose if you think about the amount of blood that would issue from the violent act ... ...

A Shadowy Future A grey aged wolf trotted across a snowy valley. The only sound heard was the crunching of snow under her padded paws. Her wary eyes watched everything ...

okay everyone, i'm really sorry about this, but i'm not posting anymore on this story. i'm not sure if posting my novel on this website would keep me from getting ...

this is chapter one of my novel and i need crits!! hope you enjoy! ------------------------------------------------ CHAPTER ONE “Hey, Evan, wait up!” Evan looked over her shoulder. Colleen, her be

Sorry about the spacing everyone.-.-" This is the fisrt part of my story. I opened my eyes, taking in my new surroundings at once. I could see that I was ...

Eh. That's all I really think about this chapter ... eh. It's weak as chapters go ... I'm tempted to cut out all the story-telling. What do you think? Keep ...

~*~*~ Khor awoke very slowly and looked around. His room was an extreme mess. He slowly stood and rubbed his head. His mind was swimming as if he couldn’t focus ...