Young Writers Society

broadcast the lie - conform, we try but it ends up broken orbit the planetary track elliptical emotional crap satellites will crash and our routine will break experimental burns easier ...

You say it's a communication breakdown but I know you feel better when I'm not around... The red light is flashing all over your face I can tell you want ...

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It's dark outside cold and alone I walk down the street my hands in my pockets my heart beating fast I quicken my pace to leave this place quicker footsteps ...

collisionchaos virtues and pretty little emo boys fixated on lollipops and snowcones cover my skin with revenga and cinnamon sticks chemicals can't get everything clean thoughts are still blackened by

Fade Away You just had to do it You couldn't stop You had to cause his body to drop The last thing you heard was a muffled thud Now he's ...

I run toward the light, Always pushing toward the edge of the darkness, Looking for a chance to be seen, A chance to finally step out of the shadow that ...

An Angel For Me The light shined through her beautiful hair, Gorgeous and talented, her skin so fair. My child, my angel, and still to this day, She's beautiful and ...

Someday I smile; I nod, I say everything's okay. Hoping I can get the courage, To tell the truth someday. You look deep in my eyes, And still can't see ...

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PerfectIf it weren't for you,I'd be perfect.If you weren't here,I'd have someone on my side.If I had never met you,Never said hi;I'd know what it was like,To love and be ...

To My Father A small boy, looking up sees his father smiling down and he knows that he is loved. For his heart is of golden affection and diamond love. ...

Better, but too personal. To the casual observer, many of your images don't connect. Not as charming a tactic as it seems. The seperate phrases and images were nice, they ...

running down cobbled streets, did you see the fading lanterns? knocked and broken in retreat, everyone shut their doors. pounding echoes of vibration, the oxygen was inhaled and all the ...

Kind of blew right by me... Very descriptive and had great imagery.