So, I have jumped right into this, headfirst. I am about to take your origin story and give you my review on it. Remember, I can be pretty dumb sometimes, and we all make mistakes, and there is no reason for you to freak out over what I write, as it is shortsighted and not-so-well-thought-out at many occasions.
That apart, let us just get to Anabelle-Lee Richardson. Now, the name is pretty infamous, right of the bat, due to a certain movie you may have popped in. (Hey, I totally forgot, Happy Halloween!)
While I have to say that there's so much work to be done on your formatting, which is, not good, especially with spacing and punctuation, but I am guilty of doing that as well. I have not read the story, but her back-story looks pretty sad.
Overall, I like it and I just wanna jump right into it.