I like how all of them (and especially the second two) use a lot of enjambment which Is easily my favourite poetic technique. The final one even has a small rhyming scheme which is nice.
maybe it's just me but I feel the last line of the second would have been better if it were "light of the moon" or even "bright moon" or similar rather than "cold moon".
All in all they were not bad at all!
Points: 69
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