Wow! So much is happening all of a sudden. Doesn't it just be like that sometimes though?
Silver hasn't even gotten the chance to process her vision before all this commotion suddenly came out of nowhere. And how is Snowfall here all of a sudden? (She's definately pre-seeing ring Snowfall).
Interesting how Silver had the dream then a vision right after. Was it the same thing? Did she speak like Moonwatcher did when she had her vision? Why not?
I guess people have had enough of prophecy right around then but why was Silver hiding her powers? Does her brother know about them?
And again with the dragons thinking power (in this case magic) won't corrupt them. Can't they see that even if the use of magic doesn't corrupt you. Power does. And Animus magic is the greatest power there is. I guess being queen could do the same thing. Hmmm... perhaps a future idea?
There were only two corrections I noticed.
"what everyone is planning to get a new queen" this doesn't sound right. It seemed like you were trying to say "what dragons are planning to get a new queen" or "why everyone is trying to get a new queen"
"Even Glory and silver had no idea, too" You didn't need to put the 'too' in at the end since you already said everyone was panicking.
Again, I love the characters you are building. Glory has mellowed out a lot by the end of Wings of Fire but she still has that grouchy side to her every now and then. And Sphinx is back! Not sure if I should be celebrating though since she's probably going to annoy Silver to no end, even if she has good intentions.