I just love the term "dragonet". It's so cute and beautiful.
A REVOLUTION IS UPON US!! I'm super stoked. Something about political intrigue really... well, intrigues me! So forgive me if I nerd out in this review a bit!
I'm really happy that Zoltar asked how Shriken did it all alone. I almost feel like that should've been questioned sooner, at least internally in the narrative. Considering the position they're currently in, that probably wouldn't be the first thing on his mind to discuss. That said, I'm glad it was discussed, and it was an awesome lead-in for this Wings of Freedom movement. (btw, what a beautiful name.)
Hidden beneath Shriken's answer is a TON of history here -- well, a small piece of history that's actually huge in scope. The Ice Talons were at war with the Wind Talons?! (Or at least in a conflict.) And it sounds like this is an ongoing conflict at that, so this is undoubtedly a dire situation for the sake of peace. I'm sure we'll hear more about how dastardly this is -- how are the Ice Talons dying? And why does Shiler think that's okay?! You can't be strong if your dragons are dying!
And how are the Wind Talons responding? I'm guessing Ice Talons have a physical advantage over the Wind Talons and can therefore overpower them quite easily. I'm also interested in the dragons that support Shiler's aggressive actions and why they would. Wartime is not a good time for anyone except the power-hungry. The kingdoms involved will suffer economically as well as physically, mentally, and even geographically or similar. Loved ones are lost or hurt in terrible ways -- I guess I'm going a bit far, but I'm just really curious as to what this war is doing to the Ice Talon Kingdom! They make it sound really bad, and I'd really like to see more of that before and after this to give it that punch. Clearly this is a hurting kingdom, a result of Shiler's authoritative rule who seems convinced she's making all the right choices and that the Ice Talon Kingdom will be stronger for it. Is she thinking like in fifty years when survival of the fittest has finally caught up and baby dragons are born under her rule?!
I like the explanation of Felistia's involvement in the succession line too. This definitely cleared up how Shiler thought Felistia was in the way. I'm still curious where Shriken falls in line though 'cause I would think that even if Felistia was gone and Shiler was dead, he'd be next in line. but they never said that, so why is Shriken left out of the line of succession? Is he a half-brother? And if Shiler is dead and there's no one else to succeed, why does that scare the Ice Talons? Why is having Shiler as their queen better than no queen at all? Shiler must be doing something right if the dragons are convinced she's their only hope.
It was soooo sweet to see Felistia care for her brother like that. It was kind of sad though to think that she was once involved in this movement and now she's just giving up, like there's no hope. It's really heart-wrenching to think about. But she cares a lot for her brother -- the two of them have clearly been through a lot. Felistia even considered doing something about it when she came back -- AND DUDE. Dude. This is awesome because no wonder she was in such deep thought earlier during their flight! I LOVED how that was worked in, so patience is a virtue! You had her staring into space, deep in her thoughts, and I was so concerned like what is wrong with her -- but she must've been thinking through plans and strategies, going through all the possibilities of making this Wings of Freedom thing work again. And now to see her admit that none of her ideas would work, that all was lost... it's really just sad. I kinda want to see this downfall in her hope a bit more, maybe during their prison bit or something. Something convinced her that nothing would work and that there was no hope for the Ice Talons, so she basically came to terms with the fact that her kingdom would fall in disrepair or, worse, extinction. I would love to get into her thought process because she knows far more than I do as to the state of her kingdom.
Also, a humble man makes a great leader. Felistia would make a great queen for sure. <3 <3 <3
I'm sorry I don't have much else to talk about though. XD There was such JUICY information dropped in this segment and I can't help but think so hard about everything and how it all might fit into the plot and basically conspiracy theories are fun and entertaining for me ahahaha.
I can't wait to read more!! <3
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