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Being into vampire stories, yours is well written. The description and details are just amazing. It was long which i love that, im a huge reader. Not many people go for length in their work.
I like the way how you mix it with some horror and some comedy. That's always well looked for, how well you do with two different genres. I may be wrong, maybe you weren't trying to make it funny, but it made me chuckle near the end, and in the middle.
Keep up the good work, i will be looking forward to reading it!