*This story is underneath my folder titled “The Laurence family’s deepest woes”. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. Enjoy!*
There was once a little boy named James who could twist the tree’s branches to grow any way he wanted and could break them apart if he felt like it. He could do many things, because he was a witch and because his parents were witches too.
His friend, Ryan, was also a witch and so were Ryan’s parents, so James could be doing magic with Ryan! Only one other friend that they both had, Asher, didn’t know that they were witches.
But that was okay. Asher didn’t need to know. He wasn’t a witch and it wouldn’t be smart to tell him. James’ parents told him that not a lot of people were witches and that if they knew, they wouldn’t believe it. They’d think the witch was crazy and wouldn’t talk to them.
So James would keep it a secret, so that he would have both of his friends to play with!
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Cute little story! It’s nice that James has a friend that not only knows he’s a witch, but is a witch as well! It’s always nicer being able to do stuff with friends. I also like that it seems like the characters are kids. Hopefully James and Ryan can meet another witch sometime and become friends with them too.
Is it like 2 in the morning? Yes. Am I wide awake? Of course. Let’s do more reviews for Project Violet Victory!
Ahh I forgot how short your stories usually areee.
But I already like we are dealing with magic. I think I might be remembering what this folder is all about. Petition to give a small summary of all that happened so far in your bold font info abt where to find the character designs.
As per usual, I like that your child characters sound like children.
As per usual, this story is too short to even get to have a plot point or emotional impact ☹ It doesnt really work as an origin for James because… I Guess we could have learnt through any other Story that he's a witch and friends with another witch and some kid that has no idea magic exists :/
Cool! I wonder what the restraints on this magic system are. That is where my mind goes. What are its costs and limitations?
I have more stories under the folder I mentioned in this one, but I might expand on James%u2019 lore. Idk.