*This story is underneath my folder titled “Circe the ringmaster!”. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33 [2]”. Enjoy!*
Circe picked up a broken shard of the circus mirror on the ground, anticipating the change. When Mr. Ferrin transformed her, he said that her teeth would whiten when she ate bones.
She always wanted to see the process happen, it was too beautiful to pass up. Besides, Circe had finished eating an entire family of supposed ghost hunters, she had to see the product of her hard work!
Her teeth were brownish-yellow at first, caked with decay that formed in rust-like mildew.
Then, the mildew began to seep away. Her teeth started to sparkle and sharpen, for the pointed ends of her teeth was a welcome side effect.
Circe’s smile was simply to die for!
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This story is connected to this one. If you want to read about the family that died, read this:
The death of Dakota’s family
I also have other stories that connect to this! If you are interested in reading them, go over to my folder on my profile titled “Circe the ringmaster!” and you’ll see the other stories! Or I can link them to you if you want.
As for Mr. Ferrin, he is a character in stories under my folder titled “Ferrin’s circus”, so if you’re interested in reading about him, then you can also check out those stories!
I hope you enjoyed this!
Hello @creeperfeverdreams Detective Ira here, I have apparently stumbled upon your manuscript while searching for clues in the Devil’s Library, which is where I believe the ancient magical book of Toramu is hidden. Since I’m already here, I shall give my opinion on this piece of yours.
Though I have to say it is very strange that I should find your writing here……again..... hmmm…..
What I can see
ooooo I see Circe has returned! Seems like this work shall gove more context for the previous one that I just reviewed, interesting. I do find the idea of a ghost hunter's teeth whitening as they eat boned very intriguing. It's not something I've come across before and it's almost like their teeth become trophies for them - a symbol of all the people they've killed.
Also seems like she has been transformed into this form which adds another layer of mystery, I can't wait to find out more! Also that pun in the end was so perfect! XD very well done I must say.
Under the magnifying glass
There are no mistakes….. O.O
This is very strange and needs investigation immediately, the Book of Toramu calls, find within the perfect novels the clues. Piece together the tales, find where the ship sails.... what was the rest of it....?I can find nothing to critique, Great Job!!
Closing the case
Overall this was another very interesting excerpt! It was lovely going through this manuscript of yours. Everything expressed was my opinion, feel free to accept or reject whatever you want.
If you have any clues relating to the book of Toramu or anything you want to clarify feel free to contact my
alias, ahem, my dear friend @canopy. She has also asked me to wish you a "Happy Review Day!" - I am working on the assumption that you know what that means.Until next time!!
― Rampo Edogawa
i really like this story the when i saw the title i thought it would be fun little story. i did not see it being a horror story but when i readed the eating a family, part it clicked i knew i would like the story. if theres one thing a can complain about its that its a little short for my taste but thats just me. and i liked the little pun at the end
Great story